Hyperactive Puppy

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Chihuahua Princess is strowing her toys all over the house..She just drops them when she is finished playing so I need an OCD pup or play pal who will keep it all cleaned up behind her..Just for fun..I know Lanterne is only suppose to be one poem five lines...

. Pup strowing all her toys ADHD Dog Dog needed OCD to clean up toys Pup Click on "About This Poem"

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/20/2011 4:06:00 PM

A lot of luminescence with this double lantern, Sara. lol. It is great usage of nature mixed with human characteristics. They are just like children, aren't they? This photo of you lil pup is awesome. He looks like an ADD dog. Rearing to get up and have a good time! Fun write. Took my mind away for a while. Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/19/2011 8:11:00 PM

sara, I really enjoyed this, and seeing the funny picture.BUt what I hate is how I get thrown offline when I try to view the "about this poem" part. Good poem.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 11/19/2011 4:19:00 PM

haha the ADHD pup strewing her toys and the OCD dog picking them up, witty lanterne :-)

Jack Horne

Date: 11/19/2011 2:47:00 PM

LOL, how true! I remember Pads' toys all over the house. I loved the pic too : )

Cory Long

Date: 11/19/2011 2:12:00 PM

nicely done!!love how you use ADHD And OCD