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Hyperactive Puppy

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Chihuahua Princess is strowing her toys all over the house..She just drops them when she is finished playing so I need an OCD pup or play pal who will keep it all cleaned up behind her..Just for fun..I know Lanterne is only suppose to be one poem  five lines...

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Pup
  strowing
      all her toys
           ADHD
                Dog


                    Dog
                       needed
                            OCD
                                to clean up toys
                                            Pup


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Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2011

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Gwendolen Song Date: 11/20/2011 4:06:00 PM A lot of luminescence with this double lantern, Sara. lol. It is great usage of nature mixed with human characteristics. They are just like children, aren't they? This photo of you lil pup is awesome. He looks like an ADD dog. Rearing to get up and have a good time! Fun write. Took my mind away for a while. Gwendolen Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/19/2011 8:11:00 PM sara, I really enjoyed this, and seeing the funny picture.BUt what I hate is how I get thrown offline when I try to view the "about this poem" part. Good poem. Login to Reply

Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 11/19/2011 4:19:00 PM haha the ADHD pup strewing her toys and the OCD dog picking them up, witty lanterne :-) Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 11/19/2011 2:47:00 PM LOL, how true! I remember Pads' toys all over the house. I loved the pic too : ) Login to Reply

Cory Long Date: 11/19/2011 2:12:00 PM nicely done!!love how you use ADHD And OCD Login to Reply