Ink Empress Poet Quatrain

Hyacinth Hymn of Healing

 In a hyacinth bed of seven stars,
winter fairies waltz in pearl elegance~
a token of faith engrossed amidst scars,
while skies drizzle rain in fruity essence.

Angel of sleep seeks through frost's icy thorn,
fallen feathers soar towards jasmine moon,
when lotus light within soul is reborn,
listen to the tree of life sigh and croon.

Somewhere between daisy dusks and rose dawns,
seeds of sun unfurl promises in gold,
sowing herbs of hope across sequined lawns.
In the realm of healing, love I behold.  

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Raki Lyon January 22, 2024 at 1:13 AM Reading your poems have always been a delight for me. A thrill where I experience all emotions,sometimes all at once. Thank you for this wonderful piece.

Regina Mcintosh January 17, 2024 at 3:52 AM You never fail to amaze me. Always a joy to read and reread., Congrats and GOd bless you, love, Gina Ink Empress January 17, 2024 at 3:58 AM Thank you! Bless you

Jay Narain January 16, 2024 at 10:16 AM Beautiful poem.

Paige Hind January 12, 2024 at 1:57 PM I love seeing this from you, Ink. A truly beautiful poem...a fav

Mystic Rose Rose January 11, 2024 at 7:04 PM Healing and Love go hand in hand in a perfect world, only we can make it perfect, so lets get to it one by one Empress :)

Robert Schatz January 11, 2024 at 6:42 PM Entrancing mystic-nature poem Ink Express. I really like "waltz in pearl elegance" and "frost's icy thorn" Cheers!

Silent One January 11, 2024 at 11:12 AM I think this is the most metaphorical quatrain I have ever read.. Your final lines, 'sowing herbs of hope across sequined lawns. In the realm of healing, love I behold,' tie the poem together with a powerful message of hope and love in the midst of life's cycles and challenges. Your use of vivid imagery and lyrical language creates a poetic projection that resonates with both the senses and the heart. Truly enchanting and evocative..

Joseph May January 11, 2024 at 9:56 AM Empress, I like "seeds of sun unfurl promises in gold" in this enchanting write, Very nicely done

Paula Goldsmith January 11, 2024 at 9:53 AM I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/great ending. Love starts in the heart... Have Blessed day writing away.......................

Sotto Poet January 11, 2024 at 9:22 AM The captivating visuals and enthusiasm displayed in your writing are truly remarkable, evoking a profound sense of spirituality and wisdom, Dear Ink. The eloquence with which you express yourself flows effortlessly, creating a vivid tapestry that beautifully captures the essence of life. Your poetic brilliance shines through this rhyming poem. I thoroughly relished such a rhythmic quatrain with fabulous but descriptive alliterations. BOL with the contest

Hilda Greenhough January 11, 2024 at 7:58 AM I so enjoyed this quatrain. It lifted me into another world of love. Great writing.

Vijay Pandit January 11, 2024 at 6:34 AM Somewhere between daisy dusks and rose dawns, seeds of sun unfurl promises in gold---In the realm of healing, love I behold---so very beautiful, Ink! I really liked reading this poem! Ink Empress January 11, 2024 at 6:58 AM Thank you so much dear Vijay for your unwavering support, truly your support means alot and you rhyme so well always: grateful

Sara Kendrick January 11, 2024 at 5:04 AM I hope that love becomes a reality. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us in these lines. Sara K Ink Empress January 11, 2024 at 6:56 AM Ah thats such a sweet and kind thing to say dear sara, i appreciate you thank you so much

Sam Scott January 11, 2024 at 4:51 AM Ink - I agree with Maria - nice to see this modification and embellishment to your usual style. It's refreshing (and you know I love a rhyme!). Your last line is a gem :) Ink Empress January 11, 2024 at 6:56 AM Thank you so much so kind of you to say. Yes i am just in a mood to try different forms i think. Lets see, its always a pleasure hearing from you: im grateful truly

Maria Williams January 11, 2024 at 4:10 AM Dear Inky, I know how proficient you are at free verse, but great to see you also dabbling in rhyme as well, and your quatrain is truly magnificent. I love this particular form. Well done...Hugs Ink Empress January 11, 2024 at 4:35 AM Awwn sweet maria so good to hear from you, yes i doe some rhyming forms sometimes but not always as it requires me to use my brain but love challenging myself at times and i enjoyed writing this. Thank you again and i hope you are doing well sending you light today and always

Lioness Onpaper January 11, 2024 at 2:50 AM winter fairies waltz in pearl elegance… mmmm damn papi… skies drizzle rain in fruity essence... look at u pouring pieces from heaven!!! fallen feathers soar towards jasmine moon, listen to the tree of life sigh and croon.. mmmmm the descriptive weave in this is EVERYTHING!!! Somewhere between daisy dusks and rose dawns, Mmmmmh!! herbs of hope across sequined lawns... how u make me melt with these beauties.. mesmerizing!! In the realm of healing, love I behold. Love the ending as well… gorgeous! Ink Empress January 11, 2024 at 4:36 AM Ah papi u da best

Hiya Sharma January 11, 2024 at 2:42 AM Gosh, dear Ink Empress, you never cease to bewitch my soul with your heartwarming words and magical wordsmithery.. What a profound and majestic wintry poem you've knitted with your artistic quill, streaking elegant colours of depth from your unique palette of metaphors, adjectives and imagery.. I absolutely love the opening, it captivated me right away! "In a hyacinth bed of seven stars,winter fairies waltz in pearl elegance~" How beautifully you've described when hope and faith revive love and Ink Empress January 11, 2024 at 2:52 AM Hah my angelic star only you will understand my crazy metaphors and word pairings … lol you are so kind and your comments add beauty to my poem. Thanm you always.. so very much Hiya Sharma January 11, 2024 at 2:45 AM "Angel of sleep seeks through frost's icy thorn" Ahh, that's incredibly beautiful, everything about this poem is so pretty, my dear poetess~ sincerely, gorgeous.. I am especially in awe of 'jasmine moon' and 'lotus light' such creative word pairings which only you can do! How those 'seeds of sun' and 'herbs of hope' blossom in a reverie of reborn light.. You've so wonderfully expressed this, with resplendent rhymes and perfect flow.. I absolutely love this, a FAV for me, best of luck for the contest ~ :)

The Aura Rhymes January 11, 2024 at 2:41 AM Angel of sleep seeks through frosts icy thorn … wow . Ink Empress January 11, 2024 at 2:45 AM Awwn thank you aura means alot coming from you