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6th in Spin a Shadorma (Sponsor: Nette Onclaud)

Judged: June 6th, 2025

hustler

coconut-
man gambling his way
walks tightropes
subjugates
gravity, among the fronds
grabbing water seeds
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Dietrich Avatar
June 7, 2025 at 4:32 PM
Like Tom, I think this is a cool one. Congrats
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