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Hush of Gold Asters--Visual 5

While a lattice of gold asters sheds its dangled petals, 
I cringe against the intrusion from rainfall's unforgiving wind.
Through night's hush, moist blooms graze my arms scenting my quietude.


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Andrea Dietrich’s Glorious Sijo Fields
Visual  No.5

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2015

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Skat A Date: 2/15/2015 10:50:00 PM NETTE, Awesome take, Congrats in Andrea's Sijo contest. -- SKAT Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 2/15/2015 10:00:00 PM Andrea, congratulations on this beautiful descriptive win. 7 Blessings Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 2/11/2015 1:28:00 AM Ah that's a creative masterpiece my dear friend Nette! Congrats on big win! Login to Reply

Monterey Sirak Date: 2/10/2015 8:10:00 AM This is glorious, filled with lush images. You shine in this form. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 2/8/2015 5:27:00 PM Way to go with this winner..Congrats on the gold..Sara Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 2/8/2015 2:11:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Frederic Parker Date: 2/8/2015 10:56:00 AM For me I would have placed it higher a truly beautiful poem..congratulations Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 2/8/2015 10:17:00 AM Oh my goodness.......this beauty would rate higher with me..., the melancholy quality makes me cringe against any intrusion of the moments while reading. A big congratulations, Nette! Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 2/8/2015 8:18:00 AM Still Gorgeous, congratulations! Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 2/8/2015 5:13:00 AM Ahh you meld with the blossoms in this perfect Sijo Nette. Big congts on your win! Login to Reply

Mohan Chutani Date: 2/8/2015 4:34:00 AM Nette, there seems to be a touch of sadness in your Sijo that lets you to be an inalienable part of the field you describe. Congrats for fine win. Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 2/8/2015 4:14:00 AM Love the honeyed mellow gentleness that seeps from these words, Nette. Perfect ending line. #7 Congrats on a much deserved win. // paul Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/8/2015 12:47:00 AM I do believe YOU were the only one to choose THIS picture, Nette. As always, your imagery is stunning. Congrats in my contest. Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 2/7/2015 4:39:00 AM A lovely Sijo by you Nette! Login to Reply

Liam Mcdaid Date: 2/5/2015 8:17:00 PM beautiful imaginary nette excellent pen dear pal Login to Reply

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 2/5/2015 4:47:00 AM O glorious nette...love Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 2/4/2015 8:34:00 AM Gorgeous Nette! Login to Reply

Avijeet Das Date: 2/3/2015 11:53:00 PM Dear Nette, This poem is simply amazing..... Kudos on writing a great poem! Login to Reply

David Meade Date: 2/2/2015 10:06:00 PM Asters anointing the soft skin of a poetess . . . sweet is the image. 7 Login to Reply

Frederic Parker Date: 2/2/2015 6:55:00 PM This sijo.. is.. glorious my poetic friend..your last line is perfect to tie it all together Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 2/2/2015 5:52:00 PM Very beautiful and serene...huggs Tim Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 2/2/2015 2:11:00 PM Such brilliant imagery Nette - your pen is golden my friend:-) hugs Jan xxx Login to Reply

Ken Carroll Date: 2/2/2015 12:59:00 PM Lovely write Nette.. Rich with imagery.. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/2/2015 12:39:00 PM - Beautiful - I wish you best of luck in contest, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 2/2/2015 12:12:00 PM Awesome way to go for the contest..Reads like a winner..Broken hearts and earthquakes make for a weepy work thanks for reading. Sara Login to Reply

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