Hush Hush Into the Night

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lindley Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 11:14 PM
You wrote a great poem here my friend. A7 -- "Each letter whispered softly like descending mist Mist that covered my lips before they have been kissed."
Fleming Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 1:27 PM
Beautifully expressed, Charmaine...Fleeting memories lost like tears in the rain. Very lovely indeed! My very best regards! :) john
A. Sharma Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 10:33 PM
Awesome write Charmaine! Wonderful pic too!
Chircop Avatar
July 1, 2015 at 7:26 AM
Manassian Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 10:18 PM
A person who can hush the stars is a special person indeed. This is awesome, in every way. Great write, Charmaine. Great imagery.
Vaso Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 8:04 PM
Simply beautiful Charmaine! Loved this, I really loved the line "I taste the night so dark ,I taste it's freezing chill"
Smith Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 6:50 PM
Hold on tightly to those stars, those memories for they will return to glow again....beautiful Charma. a fav...hugs Tim
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 6:21 PM
Charmaine, your poem is so beautifully written. The road to happiness is certainly filled with curves, twists and sometimes dead ends. A lovely touching expression of how love penetrates our souls. 7
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