Hush

You hush, do not rush, Ears are all around Like trees in the bush. Silent is taller Blabbing is lesser, Hush! don't blush, Lips could slander So ponder before you utter. Do not let your lips wander Or else your tongue Becomes slacker, So hush... else you crash. Quiet times are bigger and better, Fumbling lips are trembling lips Lacking a proper stand And ground to land. Hush! BY; CHARLES MELODY (Lightning Ink).

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Chiquitachiamaka Baity

Date: 8/8/2011 7:50:00 AM

I really love this one Charles and i luv the messege.. Beautiful piece!!!!! Smilesss!!!!!

Jide Badmus

Date: 2/18/2011 6:31:00 AM

sweet lines, nice message. i think line 8 should be utter and not alter. keep writng brother!peace

Constance La France

Date: 2/18/2011 5:40:00 AM

Wonderful poem with lots of depth and good advice,~~

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 2/17/2011 7:10:00 AM

I like this poem as the tongue can be the downfall of us for we can make or break someone's heart. As Linda Marie said-silence is golden. love mom

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/16/2011 3:04:00 PM

Silence is GOLDEN Charles and u have brought out that thought so eloquently in your lines of Hush... enjoyed this dynamic piece my friend with luv..