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hush -

I am here,
attentive ... adoring
a kiss, my single talisman
pleasing you, my only delectation
there is a warm autumn eve that whispers
daubed softly by a waxing gibbous -
a beach, bleached blue by its bleeding beams
what say you ...
will you dance with me
in the darkened dream that waits?
it saves its breath
for one tender song ...
of love.






~ 2nd Place ~  in the "Late September 2018 Premiere Any Form Or None" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.
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Nicole Avatar
September 25, 2018 at 8:10 PM
In a soft whisper, the melody of love lingers upon the heart. Your thoughts are so beautiful and romantic. And she will dance with you. :) I am sure of it. Congratulations on this win. ~ Brandy
Barden Avatar
September 28, 2018 at 2:04 AM
That's very sweet of you Brandy, and I'm so happy you found this one worthy of such kind words. Blessings, Dear Friend! :-) <3
Gauthier Avatar
September 25, 2018 at 5:43 PM
Lovely, Gregory. Congrats on your top win.
Barden Avatar
September 28, 2018 at 2:03 AM
Thank you very much, Line! :-) <3
Ibeh Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 1:56 PM
Absolutely loved this one, Greg!:-) Congratulations on your win!
Barden Avatar
September 28, 2018 at 2:02 AM
I'm glad you enjoyed this one, Edward, thank you so much, my friend! :-)
Haight Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 12:02 PM
Another beauty, so well deserving of a podium win, Greg, with such lovely romantic imagery intermingled with the splendor of nature. Sending my heartfelt congratulations to you! Sandra :)
Barden Avatar
September 28, 2018 at 2:01 AM
That's very sweet of you, Sandra, and thank you so much - I'm pleased you enjoyed it! Blessings, Dear friend! :-) <3
Bangalee Avatar
September 23, 2018 at 4:36 AM
its lovely love
Barden Avatar
September 28, 2018 at 2:01 AM
Thank you, Mahtab! :-)
Allison Avatar
September 23, 2018 at 3:16 AM
absolutely gorgeous imagery Greg, I expect to see this high on the winners list!:-) hugs Jan xx
Barden Avatar
September 28, 2018 at 2:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jan, that's very sweet - I'm glad you enjoyed it! :-) <3
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