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I am here, attentive ... adoring a kiss, my single talisman pleasing you, my only delectation there is a warm autumn eve that whispers daubed softly by a waxing gibbous - a beach, bleached blue by its bleeding beams what say you ... will you dance with me in the darkened dream that waits? it saves its breath for one tender song ... of love. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Late September 2018 Premiere Any Form Or None" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/25/2018 8:10:00 PM

In a soft whisper, the melody of love lingers upon the heart. Your thoughts are so beautiful and romantic. And she will dance with you. :) I am sure of it. Congratulations on this win. ~ Brandy

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/28/2018 2:04:00 AM

That's very sweet of you Brandy, and I'm so happy you found this one worthy of such kind words. Blessings, Dear Friend! :-) <3

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/25/2018 5:43:00 PM

Lovely, Gregory. Congrats on your top win.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/28/2018 2:03:00 AM

Thank you very much, Line! :-) <3

Edward Ibeh

Date: 9/24/2018 1:56:00 PM

Absolutely loved this one, Greg!:-) Congratulations on your win!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/28/2018 2:02:00 AM

I'm glad you enjoyed this one, Edward, thank you so much, my friend! :-)

Sandra Haight

Date: 9/24/2018 12:02:00 PM

Another beauty, so well deserving of a podium win, Greg, with such lovely romantic imagery intermingled with the splendor of nature. Sending my heartfelt congratulations to you! Sandra :)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/28/2018 2:01:00 AM

That's very sweet of you, Sandra, and thank you so much - I'm pleased you enjoyed it! Blessings, Dear friend! :-) <3

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 9/23/2018 4:36:00 AM

its lovely love

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/28/2018 2:01:00 AM

Thank you, Mahtab! :-)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/23/2018 3:16:00 AM

absolutely gorgeous imagery Greg, I expect to see this high on the winners list!:-) hugs Jan xx

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/28/2018 2:00:00 AM

Thank you so much, Jan, that's very sweet - I'm glad you enjoyed it! :-) <3