Husbands Are In Heaven Whose Wives Scold Not

All night I dream of life without wife,
Peaceful and heavenly, without any strife .
No scolding, no nagging,
Like ‘sake’ I’m having.
Alas! Its morning and gone my life.

Dt.  23/02/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Oyewole Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 4:14 PM
Way to go! Congrats on your fine win!!!
Gorelick Avatar
March 3, 2014 at 6:46 PM
Enjoyed you limerick..glad for your success in the contest. BG
Harper Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 7:51 PM
oh, heaven must be pretty good for this man, nice poem, Archana, congrats!
Gildersleeve Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 9:47 AM
Archana congrats on your fine win. Nicely expressed - Connie
Kayode Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 4:53 AM
Congrats on the win Archana . No doubt, a great one is this. You are a Champion.
Mehta Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 3:57 AM
Thanks for supporting my contest and congrats on the fine win, archana
Garg Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 10:00 AM
Thanks sir...
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