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Hurts so good

Would I lie to you...
love is like a butterfly
singing in the rain.

© Harry J Horsman 2010

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/7/2012 2:01:00 PM
A belated congrats on a wonderful win, Harry! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 9/7/2012 10:53:00 AM
Congrats on your win, my friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 9/7/2012 10:18:00 AM
A belated thank you for your kind comments on my poetry Harry. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/6/2012 3:35:00 PM
harry, this one really deserved to be at or near the top of the list. It was magnicent. Congratulations, my friend, and thanks for your recent comments to me. It's been difficult for me to get here and I appreciate all the time you take to read and comment to my old poems
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Date: 9/6/2012 8:56:00 AM
congrats harry luv on a super win for this great way of defining love .. wonderful words ..
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Date: 9/6/2012 5:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your no 2 win harry, I liked it when you posted it and I like it more now xx
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Date: 9/5/2012 7:10:00 PM
Harry, , congratulations, in the " Define Love! " contest.. Love takes me beyond all imagination possible... xox~pd...
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Date: 9/5/2012 6:45:00 PM
This is nowhere as lengthy as John Cougar Mellencamp's hit song with the same title, but it is a great haiku nevertheless.
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Date: 9/5/2012 3:00:00 PM
Well done, Harry, I like this poem much.
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Date: 9/5/2012 9:35:00 AM
I really liked your title for this, Harry! Made me smile-- but your haiku made me smile even more. Beautiful way to describe love!
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Date: 9/5/2012 9:36:00 AM
And congrats on your win :D!
Date: 9/5/2012 7:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in SKAT's "Define Love" contest Harry. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/4/2012 7:57:00 PM
Excellent write Harry. Congrats on your win! Hugs
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Date: 9/4/2012 6:02:00 PM
HARRY, Congrats in my contest. Thank you for the support~SKAT
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Date: 9/4/2012 5:58:00 PM
Yes it is, at times ... nice haiku
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Date: 9/4/2012 9:26:00 AM
Nice definition of love in hurt. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
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Date: 9/3/2012 1:08:00 PM
What a beauty and depth you have revealed in these few words Harry. It's a Gem created by you. A matchless piece of creative Haiku. It goes in my favorite list and thanks my good wishes for your contest entry my friend and thank you for your precious words on my Prayer Poem. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra... Harry Horsman
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Date: 9/3/2012 10:03:00 AM
WOW. I think I am too late to even do this contest, but I can't imagine the entries getting any better than this one.
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Date: 9/3/2012 7:13:00 AM
Harry; this is good a few words can say much. Good luck in the contest. Lucilla
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Date: 9/3/2012 2:16:00 AM
Words not needed you said them beautifully xx
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Date: 9/2/2012 2:01:00 PM
Very nice metaphor. I love haikus, have published some here
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Date: 9/2/2012 12:40:00 PM
Good luck in Skat's contest..Winner for sure..Enjoyed reading..I sat here and tried to picture that butterfly singing in the rain and I decided that this one must be metaphoric..Thanks for your kind review...Your presence at my work is always encouraging..Sara
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Date: 9/2/2012 9:58:00 AM
Nice... Now I know...Love is just a 17 syllable Haiku... Good luck in the love contest Harry... Terry
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Date: 9/2/2012 9:58:00 AM
The butterflies kiss the rain, an awe inspiring accomplishment in my mind! Very beautiful write Harry, you have done very well with this poem! Great Work!!
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Date: 9/2/2012 9:34:00 AM
Best wishes in the contest Harry...love really mean different things to different people. One love. Joy Wells
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Date: 9/2/2012 8:49:00 AM
ohh, this is a sweet declaration of love, harry... greeat stufff!
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