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Hurt

I've been wounded, I'll never heal from all the things that you did, my heart has bruises, I feel so stupid, I've been wounded I am broken, I never thought you'd leave my heart so open, all these emotions, I feel hopeless, I've been broken I've been betrayed, pain is the only memory that replays, dim are the stars that we gazed, dead is the grass where we laid, I've been betrayed I am hurting, I feel lost and no one's searching, I'm just lurking, frozen in a world that keeps on burning, I am hurting.

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Date: 2/25/2024 3:44:00 PM
I feel this pain. Your poem skillfully conveys this pain across distances. And I suppose such poetry will always be beautiful.
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Shane Thacker
Date: 2/25/2024 7:33:00 PM
Thank you, Karin. I'm so thankful that you've visited my poems.
Date: 1/27/2024 12:04:00 PM
A sad poem, Shane. It does not take much to 'wound' someone, but recovery can take much longer! May that hurt heal sooner than later. ~ paul
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Shane Thacker
Date: 1/27/2024 1:38:00 PM
Well said, Paul. Thank you for reading it, sir.

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