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Hurt

i was only a little girl, hiding from you, you took away my childhood, left me dead inside, you left me alone to work it out by myself confused and lost, i walked through the tunnel of pain you left me alone after those longs night and days, my silent tears never heard, my pain inside left to burn out, you tore me apart and ripped me apart and ripped me in pieces and you didn't care, i fight to repair the damage you did to me , but you live a normal life, like you did nothing wrong, you will never know how much pain i have to go through everyday, you didn't have to do your whole sentence which is not right and it is unfair, it's like you left me with a life sentence, i wish i was loved like normal kids by their parents, but sadly i am not, and i never will be

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Date: 3/4/2024 8:38:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 7/17/2018 4:50:00 PM
Oh what a shooting words about this poem
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Date: 7/17/2018 4:49:00 PM
Oh what shooting words about that one of, 'hurt.'
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Date: 7/17/2018 4:43:00 PM
Wow, Allison this is very deep ,I feel your hurt.
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Date: 7/17/2018 10:20:00 AM
Oh! Allison, this one's a very painful poem. You have truly conveyed the emotion u wanted to. Nice job!
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Date: 6/10/2018 10:37:00 AM
Allison, That was a very touching poem, I read your hurt and sending much much love & kindest regards Paris <3
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