Janet Lorenzo Poet Prose Poetry

Hurry Home

Off I flew, fist in the air
Leaving those villains unaware
Something was about to escape
From underneath my billowing cape
I have to hurry, up, up and away
I’ll return to fight another day
Gaining speed, higher heights
Thank goodness for those stretchy tights
Through the air I hurl my body
To home to go on my very own potty
Through the air I fly like a scoop
Yes, even Superman has to poop

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Skat A September 24, 2015 at 11:48 AM Janet, Congrats on your win. Another interesting contest. LOVE SKAT

Casarah Nance September 22, 2015 at 7:47 AM Lol I remember reading this the first time...a fun take on the theme, grats on your win! Janet Lorenzo September 22, 2015 at 9:38 AM thanks! Kind of fun to write meaningless rhymes for a change!

Dan Cwiak September 22, 2015 at 3:27 AM Does this mean that Batman, Flash, and the other Justice League members have the same predicament? I had a good laugh out of this one. Kudos on the win...well deserved. Janet Lorenzo September 22, 2015 at 9:39 AM thank you - yes, as the title of the contest implies - Everybody poops!

Viv Wigley September 22, 2015 at 1:55 AM Great write, Janet, thanks for the smile. Congrats, Viv x

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 22, 2015 at 12:25 AM Congrats on ur very witty winning write Janet! Janet Lorenzo September 22, 2015 at 9:39 AM thanks! a fun write

Andrea Dietrich August 12, 2015 at 1:07 AM This is awesome for that silly contest!! I am surprised by some of the amazing entries that his challenge has produced!!

Poet Destroyer A August 11, 2015 at 11:45 PM a fun read Janet

Pam Deremer August 11, 2015 at 7:28 PM That is funny. thank you.

Casarah Nance August 11, 2015 at 5:35 PM haha that is funny, nicely done