Hurry Fall

Dog
days of 
summer are
lingering long,
taking their toll as
lethargy grabs hold.
So I pray:
Hurry
Fall!

autumnsummerninette

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Sam Kauffman

September 28, 2023 at 11:20 AM

Well said, Kim! Wonderful subtle flow from line to line. Here in CA it has gone from summer to fall in a matter of days! Very unusual! Sending you blessings of autumn joy and lower humidity!

Jerry Brotherton

September 9, 2023 at 4:47 PM

Here in Missouri, we got a taste of fall. I hope it is not just a tease. Great job on the Ninette.

Kim Merryman

September 9, 2023 at 6:30 PM

Thank you, Jerry!

Bill Baker

September 9, 2023 at 4:35 PM

I agree, Kim, hurry Fall. Nice, interesting form of poetry. You used it well, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Kim Merryman

September 9, 2023 at 6:30 PM

Thank you, Bill! I'm tired of all this hot humid weather in Florida!

Panagiota Romios

September 9, 2023 at 11:09 AM

I admire you! This is a form I have yet to master. It’s a perfect representation of this colorful time of the year, OMG! The cat came the minuteI was writing to you. She did it earlier, too, when I was. Answering your comments to the POTD can you explain this? I can’t. Blessings, Pangie xx

Panagiota Romios

September 9, 2023 at 8:05 PM

PS..later I was writing Bob Hindaw, who has a cat. The same thing happened.roflmau

Kim Merryman

September 9, 2023 at 6:29 PM

Thank you, Pangie! And no, I can't explain the cat, but I sure got a kick out of it.