Hurricanes

Hurricane by any name is a dreaded beast
Monster winds guide every turn and twist

Clouds cluster in enormous darker shapes
Heated moisture dominates form they take 

Dressed in cloudy eye-wall winds rotate
High gusting speeds foretell its arrival date

As eye of the storm approaches a landfall
Communities begin making evacuation calls 

Stocking food and water families buckle down
Gas lines form as people begin to leave town

Death and destruction mount as storm lands
Streets and homes quickly become wetlands

Emergency shelters crowd beyond capacity
FEMA takes charge with speed and tenacity

Congress passes legislation to grant funding
Affected folks are unsure of their standing

Trash piles up burying childhood memories
Cleanup begins without hope of recoveries

Donations flow to charities like Red Cross
Insurance may recoup some of storm loss

They arrive sequentially in alphabet names
Leaving untold shattered lives in their wake 

Placed 1st
September 9, 2017
Hurricanes
Sponsor: Julie Rodeheaver
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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George Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 8:33 AM
Natural calamities like cyclones and tornados take a toll of human lives. Along with death, they also leave a trail of misery behind. Not only individuals are affected but communities and the nation as a whole. Rescue operations and funding have to be undertaken . You have dealt with the whole consequences of such emergencies !
Roper Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 9:14 PM
Vijay, back to Congratulate you on your win hugs Eve
Pandit Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 6:28 AM
Thank you Eve!
Gupta Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 12:58 AM
Coming back to convey congratulations on your podium win, Vijay ... Thanks for your congratulations on my placement as well ...
Pandit Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 5:51 AM
Thank you Probir!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 11:56 PM
Congratulations on your win, Vijay. And for a fantastic placement.
Pandit Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 5:51 AM
Thank you Subimal!
Dietrich Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 5:58 PM
Big congrats to you, Vijay
Pandit Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 6:01 PM
Thanks Andrea!
Pett Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 10:18 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Vijay, excellent piece of poetry. :)))
Pandit Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 10:48 AM
Thank you Roy!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 10:13 AM
Back for congrats!
Pandit Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 10:47 AM
Thank you Kim!
Sands Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 9:34 AM
Congratulations for your big win Vijay :)
Pandit Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 10:47 AM
Thank you Heidi!
Canerdy Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 9:03 AM
This is very descriptive--poetic, yet ACCURATE, Vijay. Congrats on your win! Janice
Pandit Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 9:27 AM
Thank you Janice for your lovely comments!
Cozart Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 8:25 AM
Congrats on your win, Vijay!
Pandit Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 9:26 AM
Thank you Dale!
Gupta Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 2:57 AM
Very poetic description ... Enjoyed reading it ... Thank you for liking my Hurricanes as well ...
Pandit Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 7:22 AM
Thank you Probir for your lovely feedback!
Andresen Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 4:07 AM
- Wonderful written, Vijay - Terrible to see how much damage it does, and people in great fear - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 7:05 AM
Agree with the sentiments, Anne-Lise! Appreciate your comments.
Dietrich Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 8:27 PM
You told all the facts, Vijay. Our sad but true reality. Well done.
Pandit Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 9:30 PM
Thanks Andrea!
Ongado Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 5:18 PM
I hope everyone is safe at this moment. Formidably expressed!
Pandit Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 5:26 PM
Thank you Jajosh-appreciate your comments!
Roper Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 5:08 PM
Imagery is wonderful, Vijay, enjoyed reading luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
Pandit Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 5:25 PM
Thank you Eve--love your feedback!
Murray Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 9:45 AM
Here in Ireland we only get baby hurricanes Vijay. You are well acquainted with the adults I see.
Pandit Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 11:34 AM
I am so delighted by your visit.. thank you for your feedback.. looking forward to reading more of your poetry, Jean!
Johnson Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 10:05 PM
Thanks, Vijah for your kind comments. I enjoyed the hurricane piece.. Let's keep writing and praying about the monsters of the sea.
Pandit Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 10:10 PM
Thank you Curtis!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 9:09 PM
Well written, Vijay! GL in contest!
Pandit Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 10:09 PM
Thank you Kim!
Onclaud Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 10:45 AM
vividly portayed.. am watching the developments of irma, vijay...greeat job and huggs
Pandit Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 12:27 PM
Thanks nette for your lovely comments!
Sands Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 7:04 AM
Well done Vijay! The end of this one says it all. Good luck in the contest :)
Pandit Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 8:00 AM
Thank you Heidi for your lovely feedback!
Sivey Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 6:12 AM
This is an incredible write on hurricanes! You have written a masterful poem here my friend! I surely loved reading your amazing poem here this morning Vijay! I am enthralled by your grandiose skill, such a stunning piece you have written, Great Work!!
Pandit Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 6:42 AM
Appreciate your lovely comments Russell--always delighted by your visit!
Leong Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 6:08 AM
well done! you captured the essence of the whole disaster; i felt like it was a news feed telling the damage done. i thoroughly enjoyed myself; nicely worded and rhymed excellently too. cheers!
Pandit Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 6:35 AM
Thank you John--love your comments!
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