Hurricanes

Hurricane by any name is a dreaded beast
Monster winds guide every turn and twist

Clouds cluster in enormous darker shapes
Heated moisture dominates form they take 

Dressed in cloudy eye-wall winds rotate
High gusting speeds foretell its arrival date

As eye of the storm approaches a landfall
Communities begin making evacuation calls 

Stocking food and water families buckle down
Gas lines form as people begin to leave town

Death and destruction mount as storm lands
Streets and homes quickly become wetlands

Emergency shelters crowd beyond capacity
FEMA takes charge with speed and tenacity

Congress passes legislation to grant funding
Affected folks are unsure of their standing

Trash piles up burying childhood memories
Cleanup begins without hope of recoveries

Donations flow to charities like Red Cross
Insurance may recoup some of storm loss

They arrive sequentially in alphabet names
Leaving untold shattered lives in their wake 

Placed 1st
September 9, 2017
Hurricanes
Sponsor: Julie Rodeheaver

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 2/2/2023 8:33:00 AM
Natural calamities like cyclones and tornados take a toll of human lives. Along with death, they also leave a trail of misery behind. Not only individuals are affected but communities and the nation as a whole. Rescue operations and funding have to be undertaken . You have dealt with the whole consequences of such emergencies !
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Date: 9/13/2017 9:14:00 PM
Vijay, back to Congratulate you on your win hugs Eve
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/14/2017 6:28:00 AM
Thank you Eve!
Date: 9/13/2017 12:58:00 AM
Coming back to convey congratulations on your podium win, Vijay ... Thanks for your congratulations on my placement as well ...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/13/2017 5:51:00 AM
Thank you Probir!
Date: 9/12/2017 11:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Vijay. And for a fantastic placement.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/13/2017 5:51:00 AM
Thank you Subimal!
Date: 9/12/2017 5:58:00 PM
Big congrats to you, Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/12/2017 6:01:00 PM
Thanks Andrea!
Date: 9/12/2017 10:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Vijay, excellent piece of poetry. :)))
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/12/2017 10:48:00 AM
Thank you Roy!
Date: 9/12/2017 10:13:00 AM
Back for congrats!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/12/2017 10:47:00 AM
Thank you Kim!
Date: 9/12/2017 9:34:00 AM
Congratulations for your big win Vijay :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/12/2017 10:47:00 AM
Thank you Heidi!
Date: 9/12/2017 9:03:00 AM
This is very descriptive--poetic, yet ACCURATE, Vijay. Congrats on your win! Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/12/2017 9:27:00 AM
Thank you Janice for your lovely comments!
Date: 9/12/2017 8:25:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/12/2017 9:26:00 AM
Thank you Dale!
Date: 9/12/2017 2:57:00 AM
Very poetic description ... Enjoyed reading it ... Thank you for liking my Hurricanes as well ...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/12/2017 7:22:00 AM
Thank you Probir for your lovely feedback!
Date: 9/11/2017 4:07:00 AM
- Wonderful written, Vijay - Terrible to see how much damage it does, and people in great fear - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/11/2017 7:05:00 AM
Agree with the sentiments, Anne-Lise! Appreciate your comments.
Date: 9/10/2017 8:27:00 PM
You told all the facts, Vijay. Our sad but true reality. Well done.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/10/2017 9:30:00 PM
Thanks Andrea!
Date: 9/10/2017 5:18:00 PM
I hope everyone is safe at this moment. Formidably expressed!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/10/2017 5:26:00 PM
Thank you Jajosh-appreciate your comments!
Date: 9/10/2017 5:08:00 PM
Imagery is wonderful, Vijay, enjoyed reading luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/10/2017 5:25:00 PM
Thank you Eve--love your feedback!
Date: 9/10/2017 9:45:00 AM
Here in Ireland we only get baby hurricanes Vijay. You are well acquainted with the adults I see.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/10/2017 11:34:00 AM
I am so delighted by your visit.. thank you for your feedback.. looking forward to reading more of your poetry, Jean!
Date: 9/9/2017 10:05:00 PM
Thanks, Vijah for your kind comments. I enjoyed the hurricane piece.. Let's keep writing and praying about the monsters of the sea.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/9/2017 10:10:00 PM
Thank you Curtis!
Date: 9/9/2017 9:09:00 PM
Well written, Vijay! GL in contest!
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Date: 9/9/2017 10:09:00 PM
Thank you Kim!
Date: 9/9/2017 10:45:00 AM
vividly portayed.. am watching the developments of irma, vijay...greeat job and huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/9/2017 12:27:00 PM
Thanks nette for your lovely comments!
Date: 9/9/2017 7:04:00 AM
Well done Vijay! The end of this one says it all. Good luck in the contest :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/9/2017 8:00:00 AM
Thank you Heidi for your lovely feedback!
Date: 9/9/2017 6:12:00 AM
This is an incredible write on hurricanes! You have written a masterful poem here my friend! I surely loved reading your amazing poem here this morning Vijay! I am enthralled by your grandiose skill, such a stunning piece you have written, Great Work!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/9/2017 6:42:00 AM
Appreciate your lovely comments Russell--always delighted by your visit!
Date: 9/9/2017 6:08:00 AM
well done! you captured the essence of the whole disaster; i felt like it was a news feed telling the damage done. i thoroughly enjoyed myself; nicely worded and rhymed excellently too. cheers!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/9/2017 6:35:00 AM
Thank you John--love your comments!
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