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Hurricane Michael

churning in the gulf
beefy category four —
the beachcomber beast

10/10/2018

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Mark Toney

Date: 10/11/2018 11:13:00 AM

Nicely done, Kim. Interesting to note that the three of us, Edward Ibeh, you and I, wrote "Hurricane Michael" haiku :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/11/2018 12:16:00 PM

I will check them out :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/11/2018 6:31:00 AM

"beachcomber beast"; I love this; you've summed it all up in those two words.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/11/2018 8:35:00 AM

Thank you...is a sad one! Who would have thought it would become almost a 5!

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/10/2018 9:02:00 AM

Sad content matter...but lovely Haiku, Kimmy...love & light...^WW^

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/10/2018 5:09:00 PM

Thank you, WW

Chris Green

Date: 10/10/2018 8:01:00 AM

I have been watching this storm as well, though hurricanes normally don't affect where I live, I always feel for those in the path. Well done my friend.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/10/2018 5:08:00 PM

Thank you, Chris

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/10/2018 7:55:00 AM

We have to count our blessings sometimes, the worst we get is heavy rain , have seen what these beasts can do. Tom.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/10/2018 5:05:00 PM

For sure...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/10/2018 7:18:00 AM

Awesome haiku, Kim! I was up all night watching Michael intensify. My former neighbors in Tallahassee did not evacuate. The path looks much like the one from Hurricane Kate in the mid 1980s, which tore giant oaks from the ground. Your last line is genuinely frightening. Let's pray lives are spared. Hugs, Carolyn

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/10/2018 5:04:00 PM

Thanks, Carolyn! I’ve been keeping an eye on it all day long!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/10/2018 7:03:00 AM

Beast is the right word for this one, Kim. I trust you are out of harm's way, as am I. It will be interesting someday to look back and see how poetry is recording history.

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/10/2018 7:19:00 AM

Glad you're not in the path of the storm, Caren!

Hurricane Michael

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