Hurricane Irma

Mortiferous winds
Entwin with copious clouds 
Menacing people
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dutta Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 10:37 AM
Too Good Nayda. Each line is precise and perfect.
Negron Flores Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 5:14 PM
Thank you Anisha.
Gupta Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 7:22 AM
Very well written ... the last line is indeed enjoyable ...
Negron Flores Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 7:37 AM
Thank you Probir.
Sands Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 7:12 PM
Well done Nayda. I agree with Sunlite. God Bless all in it's path. It's a bad one.
Negron Flores Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 7:36 AM
Amen. God bless you.
Wanter Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 6:44 PM
"Mortiferous" - really good word choice. God bless all in its path.
Negron Flores Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 7:13 PM
Amen. God bless you Sunlite Wanter.
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