Hurricane Irma

Mortiferous winds Entwin with copious clouds Menacing people

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 9/16/2017 10:37:00 AM

Too Good Nayda. Each line is precise and perfect.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 9/16/2017 5:14:00 PM

Thank you Anisha.

Probir Gupta

Date: 9/6/2017 7:22:00 AM

Very well written ... the last line is indeed enjoyable ...

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 9/6/2017 7:37:00 AM

Thank you Probir.

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/5/2017 7:12:00 PM

Well done Nayda. I agree with Sunlite. God Bless all in it's path. It's a bad one.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 9/6/2017 7:36:00 AM

Amen. God bless you.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 9/5/2017 6:44:00 PM

"Mortiferous" - really good word choice. God bless all in its path.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 9/5/2017 7:13:00 PM

Amen. God bless you Sunlite Wanter.