Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Haiku

Hurricane

(windstorm)

low pressure on sea
clouds sucked in... 
windstorm swirls moisture

(blind eye)

hurricane seeks shore
eye follows blindly the track…
life’s rhythm battered

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October 18, 2021
Contest : Lune (Mixed Pair)
Sponsor : William Kakaula
Brian Strand Contest A Strand (1060) 

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Beata Agustin November 1, 2021 at 5:24 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... and your talent likewise. God bless you.

Sam Kauffman October 29, 2021 at 10:17 AM Swirling delight, Subimal! Congratulations on your first place win! Subimal Sinha-Roy October 30, 2021 at 12:22 AM Thank you, Sam, for your visit and comment which I value so much.

Joanna Daniel October 29, 2021 at 12:19 AM Lovely images captured strongly, Subimal, congratulations:) Subimal Sinha-Roy October 30, 2021 at 12:23 AM Thank you, Jo foe your visit and encouraging comment.

Susan Ashley October 28, 2021 at 7:18 PM Dear Subimal, your creative pen captures the essence of the hurricane with artistic finesse. Enthralling imagery! Congratulations for your excellent trophy win in William’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Subimal Sinha-Roy October 30, 2021 at 12:25 AM Thank you, Susan, for your nice comments, I appreciate and value so much.

Paula Goldsmith October 28, 2021 at 11:52 AM Congratulations on your win. A creative Haiku write. Have a blessed autumn day.................. Subimal Sinha-Roy October 30, 2021 at 12:25 AM Thank you, Paula for your visit and nice comment.

Ann Peck October 28, 2021 at 9:16 AM Dear Subimal, Your poem is so strong and beautiful! Congratulations on winning First Place! Subimal Sinha-Roy October 30, 2021 at 12:26 AM Thank you, Ann, for your encouraging comments.

Jan Allison October 28, 2021 at 5:13 AM Excellent ink Subimal, many congrats on your trophy win:-) hugs Jan xx Subimal Sinha-Roy October 30, 2021 at 12:26 AM Thank you, Jan, for your nice comment.

Paulette Calasibetta October 28, 2021 at 4:38 AM Hi Subimal, Congratulations on your WIN! Truly well deserved, moving and magical! Blessings, Paulette Subimal Sinha-Roy October 30, 2021 at 12:27 AM Thank you, Paulette for your visity and encouraging comments.

William Kelii Kekaula October 28, 2021 at 4:17 AM Subimal, a magnificent Lune poem, it is pure magic my friend, my compliments on your trophy win, Aloha! Subimal Sinha-Roy October 30, 2021 at 12:29 AM Thank you, William, for the placement and your encouraging comments. I congratulate other winners.