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Hunting For Dinosaurs

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meter-long knifed jaws
   tyrannosaurus *rawwrrh* herd…
       goodbye grazing field

feasting on life forms
    if dinosaurs lived today...
        i’ll eat them alive!



double haiku
P.D's Animal Poem Contest

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Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 8/6/2012 4:20:00 AM

Lol...too cute!!!! Love this Haiku of yours.. :) and i see it placed in a contest..Congrats!!!

Royal Trevino

Date: 1/16/2011 7:03:00 AM

congrats! on your great win =(^.^)= Royal

Hathor Ammutlinra

Date: 1/14/2011 10:07:00 PM

awesome Nette' congrats' (lin~ra)

Tahera Mannan

Date: 1/14/2011 7:47:00 PM

Superr haikus Nette. Many congratulations for this win.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/14/2011 6:53:00 PM

Great work Nette. congratulations on your high win. Love, Joyce

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/14/2011 4:24:00 PM

And what a wonderful win Nette, Congratulations, on your well deserved haiku~enjoyed your awesome entry for the contest,.. p.d.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/14/2011 2:55:00 PM

Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Skat, nette

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/14/2011 1:36:00 PM

Good entry and congratulations with your win.

Kash Poet

Date: 1/14/2011 12:17:00 PM

This one is excellent Nette!Congratulations on your well deserved win!-kashinath

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/14/2011 12:15:00 PM

congratulations Nette on this great result. and warm thanks for your well wishes.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/14/2011 10:22:00 AM

Congratulations Nette on your well deserved win in SKAT*'s contest "Dinosaurs". Love, Carol

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 1/14/2011 10:12:00 AM

Hello Nette, Congratulations on your win. Well done As Always, Shar

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/14/2011 8:32:00 AM

Way to go, Nette. A well deserved place. I especially love the haiku effect of that first one!! Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/14/2011 4:55:00 AM

Congrats Nette my friend on your super big win in the Dinosaur contest with this wonderful entry into their world luv.. enjoy this marvelous win with luv...

Skat A

Date: 1/13/2011 11:51:00 PM

Congratulations, Nette! Thanks for supporting my contest~SKAT

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/13/2011 11:34:00 PM

Congrats on these winning haiku's, Nette. Harry

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 1/13/2011 1:48:00 AM

The last line from the second stanza really came unexpected completing your haiku chain in perfect form. Not sure on 2nd line count-could be me so do check...? Otherwise each stanza stands alone in own right too. Well done!

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/12/2011 6:46:00 PM

Wow and this is when you are in good mood, very interesting haiku's these, enjoyed reading them Nette. good luck in contest. Harry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/12/2011 5:35:00 PM

Cool and as Joe said, "ferocious!!!" I liked how you finished bothof these using some kind of twist or humor to make them as haiku-ish as possible. Luv, Andrea

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/12/2011 12:17:00 PM

You sound very ferocious,Nette..with a beast of a write, to go with it! al the very best always. especially in the contest.

Fabiyas M V

Date: 1/12/2011 9:49:00 AM

Beautiful thoughts on dinosaur.Great entry for the contest,Nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/12/2011 8:31:00 AM

Super entry Nette my friend.. sorry to hear about your computer woes ..hope all are cleared up now luv... a fantastic read on the intricacy of dino life... good luck in the new contest... I already entered with Dinosaur Domain..luv..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/12/2011 7:39:00 AM

wow! what a hunt.. good luck,..p.d.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/12/2011 4:58:00 AM

Very meaningful haiku, good luck in the contest, nette