Nette Onclaud Poet Haiku

Hunting For Dinosaurs

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meter-long knifed jaws
   tyrannosaurus *rawwrrh* herd…
       goodbye grazing field

feasting on life forms
    if dinosaurs lived today...
        i’ll eat them alive!



double haiku
P.D's Animal Poem Contest

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Pace Ink-U-Script August 6, 2012 at 4:20 AM Lol...too cute!!!! Love this Haiku of yours.. :) and i see it placed in a contest..Congrats!!!

Royal Trevino January 16, 2011 at 7:03 AM congrats! on your great win =(^.^)= Royal

Hathor Ammutlinra January 14, 2011 at 10:07 PM awesome Nette' congrats' (lin~ra)

Tahera Mannan January 14, 2011 at 7:47 PM Superr haikus Nette. Many congratulations for this win.

Joyce Johnson January 14, 2011 at 6:53 PM Great work Nette. congratulations on your high win. Love, Joyce

Poet Destroyer A January 14, 2011 at 4:24 PM And what a wonderful win Nette, Congratulations, on your well deserved haiku~enjoyed your awesome entry for the contest,.. p.d.

Dr.Ram Mehta January 14, 2011 at 2:55 PM Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Skat, nette

Robert Pettit January 14, 2011 at 1:36 PM Good entry and congratulations with your win.

Kash Poet January 14, 2011 at 12:17 PM This one is excellent Nette!Congratulations on your well deserved win!-kashinath

Joe Maverick January 14, 2011 at 12:15 PM congratulations Nette on this great result. and warm thanks for your well wishes.

Carol Sunshine Brown January 14, 2011 at 10:22 AM Congratulations Nette on your well deserved win in SKAT*'s contest "Dinosaurs". Love, Carol

Sharon Ruebel January 14, 2011 at 10:12 AM Hello Nette, Congratulations on your win. Well done As Always, Shar

Andrea Dietrich January 14, 2011 at 8:32 AM Way to go, Nette. A well deserved place. I especially love the haiku effect of that first one!! Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 14, 2011 at 4:55 AM Congrats Nette my friend on your super big win in the Dinosaur contest with this wonderful entry into their world luv.. enjoy this marvelous win with luv...

Skat A January 13, 2011 at 11:51 PM Congratulations, Nette! Thanks for supporting my contest~SKAT

Harry Horsman January 13, 2011 at 11:34 PM Congrats on these winning haiku's, Nette. Harry

Anna-Marie Docherty January 13, 2011 at 1:48 AM The last line from the second stanza really came unexpected completing your haiku chain in perfect form. Not sure on 2nd line count-could be me so do check...? Otherwise each stanza stands alone in own right too. Well done!

Harry Horsman January 12, 2011 at 6:46 PM Wow and this is when you are in good mood, very interesting haiku's these, enjoyed reading them Nette. good luck in contest. Harry

Andrea Dietrich January 12, 2011 at 5:35 PM Cool and as Joe said, "ferocious!!!" I liked how you finished bothof these using some kind of twist or humor to make them as haiku-ish as possible. Luv, Andrea

Joe Maverick January 12, 2011 at 12:17 PM You sound very ferocious,Nette..with a beast of a write, to go with it! al the very best always. especially in the contest.

Fabiyas M V January 12, 2011 at 9:49 AM Beautiful thoughts on dinosaur.Great entry for the contest,Nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 12, 2011 at 8:31 AM Super entry Nette my friend.. sorry to hear about your computer woes ..hope all are cleared up now luv... a fantastic read on the intricacy of dino life... good luck in the new contest... I already entered with Dinosaur Domain..luv..

Poet Destroyer A January 12, 2011 at 7:39 AM wow! what a hunt.. good luck,..p.d.

Dr.Ram Mehta January 12, 2011 at 4:58 AM Very meaningful haiku, good luck in the contest, nette

Gareth James January 12, 2011 at 3:22 AM Great piece. Good luck on SKATS contest