Huntin Seeson Two

winnie went hunting for men
wally went running again
wally a sprinter?
winnie in winter
built around wally a pen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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October 24, 2016 at 5:57 PM
Wally was feeling walled off, He couldn't get to the trough, Winnie cared not, she had him caught, all Wally could do was scoff
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October 25, 2016 at 10:58 AM
Yeah, we act tough don't we? :-):-);-)
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October 24, 2016 at 11:27 AM
The pen sprung a leak...ol wally looked bleak...covered in mud...heard a big thud....as Winnie shot his two cheeks
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October 25, 2016 at 10:57 AM
spose it shoulda been Sadie...when is S Hawkins day anyway? GO CUBBIES!!!
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