Hunters moon

The deep red Blended with the flowing stream A shallow pink memory

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Mike Gentile

Date: 1/29/2024 4:15:00 AM

John, what gorgeous imagery you have created in your haiku! The visions they conjure are awesome! Happy Monday!!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/28/2024 8:55:00 PM

Beautiful. I can see this place. A well enjoyed Haiku.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/28/2024 4:01:00 PM

My dad often told me about the 'Hunter's Moon'-he told me so many Native American myths and tales...enjoyed the read, Sara

Silent One

Date: 1/28/2024 11:21:00 AM

Wonderful imagery John..

Jan Allison

Date: 1/28/2024 10:03:00 AM

what a gorgeous haiku John:-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/28/2024 8:47:00 AM

A colorful/lovely Haiku write. I enjoyed reading it... Have a wonderful day/week................

Lin Lane

Date: 1/28/2024 7:52:00 AM

My turn to compliment your Haiku, John. The shining blood red moon's reflection across the gently rippling water seems to have faded from the sanguine color and now appears as a shade of pink. Such a nighttime setting would be breathtaking.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/28/2024 6:58:00 AM

Oh my, this is a gorgeous haiku with beautiful use of colours that really add a glorious touch to the atmosphere and also enhance the highlighted depth of imagery.. "A shallow pink memory" Ahhh, I absolutely love how you've ended it.. Reflects depth and emotions..Wonderfully crafted, enjoyed reading this! Sending many best wishes & light..

John Lawless
Date: 1/28/2024 7:26:00 AM

Thank you for stopping to read and comment Hiya, and in such depth and insight.....much appreciated.