Hunters moon

The deep red
Blended with the flowing stream
A shallow pink memory
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Gentile Avatar
January 29, 2024 at 4:15 AM
John, what gorgeous imagery you have created in your haiku! The visions they conjure are awesome! Happy Monday!!
Greenhough Avatar
January 28, 2024 at 8:55 PM
Beautiful. I can see this place. A well enjoyed Haiku.
One Avatar
January 28, 2024 at 11:21 AM
Wonderful imagery John..
Allison Avatar
January 28, 2024 at 10:03 AM
what a gorgeous haiku John:-) hugs Jan xx
Goldsmith Avatar
January 28, 2024 at 8:47 AM
A colorful/lovely Haiku write. I enjoyed reading it... Have a wonderful day/week................
Lane Avatar
January 28, 2024 at 7:52 AM
My turn to compliment your Haiku, John. The shining blood red moon's reflection across the gently rippling water seems to have faded from the sanguine color and now appears as a shade of pink. Such a nighttime setting would be breathtaking.
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January 28, 2024 at 6:58 AM
Oh my, this is a gorgeous haiku with beautiful use of colours that really add a glorious touch to the atmosphere and also enhance the highlighted depth of imagery.. "A shallow pink memory" Ahhh, I absolutely love how you've ended it.. Reflects depth and emotions..Wonderfully crafted, enjoyed reading this! Sending many best wishes & light..
Lawless Avatar
January 28, 2024 at 7:26 AM
Thank you for stopping to read and comment Hiya, and in such depth and insight.....much appreciated.
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