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Hunter's Cabin

deer hunter's cabin   
left naked in former woods...
miles_strip cleared of trees

Not sure that this qualifies as a true Haiku

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2013

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January 21, 2015 at 3:09 PM

An image of today indeed Sara. I love what you write, I dislike what I see, James .....

Poet Destroyer A

April 28, 2013 at 5:48 PM

Sara, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy the new coming week. Always & Forever! HUGS **LINDA**

April 22, 2013 at 8:33 AM

A forlorn scene indeed. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

April 21, 2013 at 2:21 PM

Loved the imagery in this very well written piece

Black Eyed Susan

April 20, 2013 at 12:47 AM

it looks like a haiku to me... nice imagery sara :)

April 19, 2013 at 2:16 PM

I think it's a lovely haiku - loved picturing this

April 18, 2013 at 1:00 PM

love this Sara ;} reminds me of the movie Fern Gully" The last rainforest, you can see it on utube, you have a great day ;} <3

Michael Ainsley

April 18, 2013 at 10:28 AM

I can see it ! nice writting.

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 18, 2013 at 7:21 AM

- Excellent haiku,Sara !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

April 18, 2013 at 12:59 AM

i love that part about naked in former woods.

Lucilla Carrillo

April 17, 2013 at 5:49 PM

Sara; this is really nice. I can just picture the Cabin with no trees around. thanks for sharing and for reading my poem. Many blessings. Lucilla

April 17, 2013 at 5:04 PM

An age old tradition, now a blight. God's earth is distressed while being undressed. Thanks for stopping by Sara. Peace. :)

April 16, 2013 at 11:11 PM

a most daring write, sara... your 'ku engages the reader to look at life through the eyes of a hunter... you were missed as well.. hope to be here when time allows.. hope you are fine... huggs!..:)

Demetrios Trifiatis

April 16, 2013 at 5:40 PM

Sad picture for the hunters! Joyous for the deer! Happy for the writer! Rewarding for the reader!

Seosamh De Burca

April 16, 2013 at 1:27 PM

Excellent, I could never write Haiku and so admire those that can and you certainly can. Well done on your poem I really enjoyed this.

April 16, 2013 at 1:58 AM

I would this say this is still a haiku. I imagine it'd be a shock to the deer hunter waking up to find his forest all but disappeared! Sad to think of that cabin left so abandoned...

Ravi Sathasivam

April 16, 2013 at 1:55 AM

Excellent Haiku. Enjoyed. Tfs

April 16, 2013 at 1:52 AM

a long wait for regrowth - lignified dreams become cellulose nightmares.

Poet Destroyer A

April 15, 2013 at 8:28 PM

Hello Sara, amusing and entertaining imagery. always a pleasure in reading your work. always~ Linda

April 15, 2013 at 8:25 PM

This is a very awesome and masterful Haiku! I would consider it a Haiku, but knowing if this is a Haiku is not my strong field! You were quite creative with this poem my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous piece, Great Work!!

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