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Hunter's Cabin 

deer hunter's cabin   
left naked in former woods...
miles_strip cleared of trees


Not sure that this qualifies as a true Haiku

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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James Fraser
Date: 1/21/2015 3:09:00 PM
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An image of today indeed Sara. I love what you write, I dislike what I see, James .....
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 4/28/2013 5:48:00 PM
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Sara, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy the new coming week. Always & Forever! HUGS **LINDA**
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Daver Austin
Date: 4/22/2013 8:33:00 AM
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A forlorn scene indeed. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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Karen Anglesey
Date: 4/21/2013 2:21:00 PM
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Loved the imagery in this very well written piece
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Black Eyed Susan
Date: 4/20/2013 12:47:00 AM
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it looks like a haiku to me... nice imagery sara :)
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Jack Horne
Date: 4/19/2013 2:16:00 PM
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I think it's a lovely haiku - loved picturing this
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 4/18/2013 1:00:00 PM
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love this Sara ;} reminds me of the movie Fern Gully" The last rainforest, you can see it on utube, you have a great day ;} <3
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Michael Ainsley
Date: 4/18/2013 10:28:00 AM
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I can see it ! nice writting.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/18/2013 7:21:00 AM
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- Excellent haiku,Sara !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/18/2013 12:59:00 AM
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i love that part about naked in former woods.
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/17/2013 5:49:00 PM
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Sara; this is really nice. I can just picture the Cabin with no trees around. thanks for sharing and for reading my poem. Many blessings. Lucilla
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Robert Johnson
Date: 4/17/2013 5:04:00 PM
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An age old tradition, now a blight. God's earth is distressed while being undressed. Thanks for stopping by Sara. Peace. :)
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 4/16/2013 11:11:00 PM
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a most daring write, sara... your 'ku engages the reader to look at life through the eyes of a hunter... you were missed as well.. hope to be here when time allows.. hope you are fine... huggs!..:)
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/16/2013 5:40:00 PM
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Sad picture for the hunters! Joyous for the deer! Happy for the writer! Rewarding for the reader!
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Seosamh De Burca
Date: 4/16/2013 1:27:00 PM
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Excellent, I could never write Haiku and so admire those that can and you certainly can. Well done on your poem I really enjoyed this.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/16/2013 1:58:00 AM
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I would this say this is still a haiku. I imagine it'd be a shock to the deer hunter waking up to find his forest all but disappeared! Sad to think of that cabin left so abandoned...
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 4/16/2013 1:55:00 AM
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Excellent Haiku. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Michael Dom
Date: 4/16/2013 1:52:00 AM
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a long wait for regrowth - lignified dreams become cellulose nightmares.
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Date: 4/15/2013 8:28:00 PM
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Hello Sara, amusing and entertaining imagery. always a pleasure in reading your work. always~ Linda
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Russell Sivey
Date: 4/15/2013 8:25:00 PM
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This is a very awesome and masterful Haiku! I would consider it a Haiku, but knowing if this is a Haiku is not my strong field! You were quite creative with this poem my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous piece, Great Work!!
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