Sara Kendrick Poet Senryu

Hunter's Bullet Fired

hunter's bullet fired
turtledove falls swiftly down...
white aura floats up

poet collapses
upon kitchen floor silence...
white garment caress

white light very bright
draws dove poetess to come...
white light tunnel's end  

Who knows what it is...

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Harry Horsman October 7, 2012 at 4:11 PM interesting these are, love the second one best, although all good.....

Joe Maverick October 7, 2012 at 3:33 PM Quite an adventuress write Sara; good feeling here in Its trusting portrayl of life, spirit,and eternity's reality.." In existence.. Well donr Sara. yours Joe..)

Jack Horne October 7, 2012 at 12:54 PM beautiful write, my friend. Congrats on your wins : )

Nette Onclaud October 7, 2012 at 8:03 AM intrigued by this, sara... sounds spiirtually laden to me...cryptic yet beautifully expressed.. huggs!..:)

Barbara Gorelick October 7, 2012 at 12:42 AM What a great idea to use" white" in this way..enjoyed this so much. BG

Andrea Dietrich October 6, 2012 at 11:35 PM an interesting story, sara. What inspired this?

Robert Pettit October 6, 2012 at 9:49 PM I saw you were one shy of reaching 2200 poems. I was waiting for this one. This is a nice way to describe how existence in the hereafter might appear.

Timothy Jacks October 6, 2012 at 7:15 PM This is very tricky to an unsuspecting mind....

Joseph May October 6, 2012 at 5:20 PM a well woven delight...enjoyed...hugs....is this for the contest...

Lucilla Carrillo October 6, 2012 at 5:04 PM Sara; This is fantastic. Thanks for sharing. Lucy

Russell Sivey October 6, 2012 at 4:00 PM I know what it is Sara, it's beautiful! I really enjoyed this fascinating write that you have so illustriously written! Such a gorgeous poem, vastly incredible my friend! What a delightful write about a wondrous white light! Terrific piece, Great Work!!