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Hunter

I fly up so high floating in the sky watching below for my prey If they knew they'd fear for them death is near This is part of natures way I make my attack hit the water smack With my talons grab on tight The pike in my grip it will never slip It is trapped within my might Trying a form Dr. Ram's explained called an "Alouette" 557557 aabccb

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/31/2013 1:24:00 AM

way to be inspired by someone's poetry form. I think I heard of this form before too. Nicely done, Richard.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/31/2013 7:53:00 AM

Thanks Andrea.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/30/2013 9:51:00 PM

Loved this one, you are the "Robert Bateman" of poetry!!! :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/31/2013 7:53:00 AM

What a great comment Arthur, I'm flattered.

Richard D Seal

Date: 10/30/2013 9:36:00 PM

A combination of power and image in these words Rick, I can see that bird soaring and diving. Take care, Richard

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/31/2013 7:55:00 AM

I'm pleased my thoughts came through clearly.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 10/30/2013 8:31:00 PM

a great poem Rick enjoyed Shadow x smile hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/31/2013 7:55:00 AM

Thanks so much Shadow.

Donna Jones

Date: 10/30/2013 6:05:00 PM

Hey Richard ...I don't know if this is about eagles or not but it sounds like it to me..I've seen bald eagles catch fish and its a beautiful thing..just exactly as your poem describes...loved this alot

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/31/2013 7:57:00 AM

You are right Donna, it's an eagle.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 10/30/2013 6:44:00 AM

You soar across the pages with a pen in your grip and master every form you write.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/31/2013 7:58:00 AM

I always enjoy your thoughtful comments.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/29/2013 11:48:00 AM

Rule the sky, Richard....Your poetry makes me soar as well. You take on almost any form and make it shine...Is it a wonder you are a favorite poet of mine???

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/31/2013 7:59:00 AM

Aww, that is so sweet Eileen, thanks for making my day!

Poet Tacito

Date: 10/29/2013 10:28:00 AM

This was different & awesome. I like the moment you captured here. =D

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/29/2013 10:36:00 AM

Thanks Drake

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/29/2013 12:33:00 AM

how i wish you entered this supper poem in my past contest on alouette, rich.. but i guess you were not around yet, then... a fearless, strong write!..:) huggs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/29/2013 8:14:00 AM

Thanks Nette, this was a fun form to try. Huggs back.

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 10/28/2013 10:22:00 PM

This is a great poem. when the hunter is flying high. The prey on the ground don't have a chance. thanks for sharing. ... lucilla

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/29/2013 8:14:00 AM

My pleasure Luccila.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/28/2013 10:01:00 PM

Richard, so quick to grasp and you have done it very nicely with the theme of the hunter., Not only that you have personified the skylark as the name of the form suggest. kudos. Richard. Here is link for alouette: http://popularpoetryforms.blogspot.in/2013/03/alouette.html

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/29/2013 8:16:00 AM

Thanks Dr. Ram I will have a look when time permits.

Colleen Bono

Date: 10/28/2013 9:57:00 PM

always challenging yourself. hope all is well. I have to go to a specialist surgeon at the university of washington and probabaly have surgery on the infection in my ear. It is still there and hurting bad. take care, Thinking of you, Colleen

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/29/2013 8:17:00 AM

I am glad you are getting the help you need. I have missed your visits. Hugs Rick