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Hunter

Camouflaged under the moon, Two clicks to the right to zoom, Slowly I adjust my sights, Focusing on candlelight... I hold my breath so I can aim, Till none is left for me to blame, Adjusting for the faintest wind, That her hair is blowing in... Careful not to make a sound, Crushing roses on the ground, I laid down the night before, So I could lay the trap once more... All I had to do was wait, Because the prey just took the bait, I persued with so much vigor, Just my pulse would pull the trigger... As I looked toward my mark, I saw it pierced her in the heart, So I kneeled on both my knees, To see who fell in love with me...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/15/2011 11:52:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this afternoon Terrence. Have a great weekend and I hope you find lots of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/14/2011 4:49:00 PM
Interesting way of saying fall in love..Creative work...Sara
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