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Hungry Seagulls - Haiku Sequence

picnic tables scattered in the park awaiting the sun radio belts out tunes seagulls circling whiffs of chipwagon few treasured sunrays awaken dormant daydreams ~ hope lurks on standby AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on July 8, 2020 for contest STRAND COMPLETELY NEW (7) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST

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Date: 7/17/2020 2:37:00 AM
I am dying to know what chipwagons are. Well done! Congratulations Line.
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Date: 7/17/2020 8:46:00 AM
LOL ~ chipwagons sell french fries ~
Date: 7/14/2020 1:58:00 PM
Loved your haiku sequence Line. Really vibrant and musical. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 7/14/2020 3:11:00 PM
Thanks, Aditi. Much appreciated ~
Date: 7/13/2020 9:36:00 PM
So descriptive, Line. A wonderful portrait of summer at the beach. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/14/2020 8:29:00 AM
Thank you very much, Sam ~
Date: 7/11/2020 2:10:00 PM
LOVE these, Line. Congrats on a very worthy win.
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Date: 7/14/2020 8:29:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea. Much appreciated ~
Date: 7/10/2020 11:28:00 PM
Love your haiku sequence, Line. Enjoyed the last line "hope lurks on standby". Congrats ~ John
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Date: 7/11/2020 12:49:00 AM
Thanks, John. Much appreciated.
Date: 7/10/2020 7:13:00 PM
Line congrats on your top win!(;)
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Date: 7/10/2020 9:12:00 PM
Thanks, Brenda. Much appreciated ~
Date: 7/10/2020 11:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story with few words. Lets' eat and feed the birds. Enjoy your win and day............
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Date: 7/10/2020 4:49:00 PM
share and share alike ~ lol

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