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Hungry Hawk

Listen to your heart
think with your mind
before you think you're apart.

Walk through the fields,
get out from the dust
be covered behind the shields,
make sure you don't have any rust.

Wake up free of concerns, 
take your soul for a walk
because there are no returns
for a solitary hungry hawk
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Fowler Avatar
November 5, 2023 at 6:45 PM
I feel I am that solitary hungry hawk Maria. Your descriptive poem is compelling. :)
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 1:26 AM
Sometimes we all feel like that Linda.! Thans a lot for your lovely words. Hugsxxxx
Rolland Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 7:37 AM
nice philosophy, precious words to be listened, have a sweet week end poet
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 2:09 PM
Thank you very much Yann. Have a great weekendxxx
Buhagiar Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 3:26 AM
If I understood your poem well, it is not pleasant to be attacked by a hawk. If I'm wrong, I apologize. Blessings
Buhagiar Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 4:26 PM
Thanks for your soup ail. Blessings.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 3:36 AM
Hello Victor...Don't worry...It's just literary sense. No apologies Thanks for your comment. Blessings!
Connelly Avatar
October 31, 2023 at 1:58 AM
Wonderful words Maria. Thanks
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
October 31, 2023 at 3:00 AM
Thank you so much Jeff. Have a great dayxxxx
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