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Listen to your heart think with your mind before you think you're apart. Walk through the fields, get out from the dust be covered behind the shields, make sure you don't have any rust. Wake up free of concerns, take your soul for a walk because there are no returns for a solitary hungry hawk

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Date: 11/5/2023 6:45:00 PM
I feel I am that solitary hungry hawk Maria. Your descriptive poem is compelling. :)
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/6/2023 1:26:00 AM
Sometimes we all feel like that Linda.! Thans a lot for your lovely words. Hugsxxxx
Date: 11/3/2023 7:37:00 AM
nice philosophy, precious words to be listened, have a sweet week end poet
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/3/2023 2:09:00 PM
Thank you very much Yann. Have a great weekendxxx
Date: 11/2/2023 3:26:00 AM
If I understood your poem well, it is not pleasant to be attacked by a hawk. If I'm wrong, I apologize. Blessings
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 11/2/2023 4:26:00 PM
Thanks for your soup ail. Blessings.
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/2/2023 3:36:00 AM
Hello Victor...Don't worry...It's just literary sense. No apologies Thanks for your comment. Blessings!
Date: 10/31/2023 1:58:00 AM
Wonderful words Maria. Thanks
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 10/31/2023 3:00:00 AM
Thank you so much Jeff. Have a great dayxxxx

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