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One touch leaves me breathless, like the wind teasing a tiny butterfly, but hungry eyes caress silky skin, and my lips find your lullaby Upon the melody, of your kiss the nude gem of your paradise, while love takes you softly to such bliss, I seem to get lost in your sighs One look leaves me speechless, like music playing with no words to dance to, but then you go undress the magic, with hungry eyes of tender blue ______________ Theme~ In Your Eyes Something playful, romantic and passionate Form of Poetry~ Tri-fall Consists three 6-line stanzas, for a total of 18 lines. The rhyme scheme is a,b,c,a,b,c and meter for each stanza is as follows: 6/3/8, 6/3/8. Featured Poem- 4/14/2019

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Joseph May

Date: 1/15/2024 6:02:00 PM

I love the lullaby line in this romantic write Brandy, Wonderful write, I enjoyed the read, hugs

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/15/2024 6:38:00 PM

Thank you Joseph, for sharing your favorite line within. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. My heart is smiling. :) Hugs, Brandy

David Smith

Date: 5/31/2022 9:16:00 PM

Wish more were able to feel your passion for the real thing. Too many have let hate take its place and engaging in not nice activities. Too many eyes show total lack of empathy. 68 years above ground suggest to me that true evil exists in some hearts but thankfully not in most yet. Poems like this I am sure can keep it that way. Best regards David in NZ

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/1/2022 10:11:00 AM

Passion is a part of me and my words revolve around that emotion. I completely agree with you, David. There are many in the world lacking compassion. My heart is true and I write from the depth of my soul. You and your kind words are appreciated. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Brian Strand

Date: 10/2/2021 12:35:00 AM

They say so much Brandy

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/2/2021 6:35:00 PM

Yes, they do. Thank you, Brian. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Running Wolves

Date: 1/22/2020 7:43:00 AM

everything about this poem is perfect.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/22/2020 11:54:00 AM

Such a wonderful thing to say. Thank you Robert. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 4/16/2019 3:12:00 AM

sweet expression- Upon the melody,/ of your kiss /the nude gem of your paradise,

Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/16/2019 10:33:00 AM

Thank you MAHTAB. I appreciate your kind words. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy

Paul Callus

Date: 12/25/2018 3:46:00 AM

Definitely romantic, sensual and passionate, Brandy! Eyes have been the downfall of many a man...and woman! Interesting form of poetry; must have a go at it! ~ Hope you're having a wonderful Christmas! Regards // paul

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/25/2018 9:46:00 PM

Thank you Paul. You are absolutely right, eyes certainly express so many emotions, sometimes more than words ever could. A downfall at times. True. I appreciate you and your kind words. Try this form if you wish, it is very easy. I am enjoying a wonderful Christmas, I hope you are too. :) Brandy

Vladislav Raven

Date: 12/24/2018 12:43:00 PM

Hi Brandy, this is such a wonderful write from your. This is such a poetic jewel. Your words ever a song to gently caress the heart. Emotions flow so easily while I read this excellent work. I am lost within the imagery of your words. You paint a living canvas. Another Fave Brandy. Have a wonderful Christmas. Hugs....Mike. XX

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/24/2018 2:42:00 PM

Hi Mike, thank you for this wonderful comment. Your thoughts are appreciated. Such wonderful things to say about me and my poetry. Thank you. My best to you. Merry Christmas. :) Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/22/2018 11:34:00 AM

Hi Brandy, A very evocative write, beautifully penned and the way you lose yourself in these poetic phrases is truly awesome. A great piece of poetry! A Blessed Christmas to you and yours! Jennifer.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/22/2018 9:27:00 PM

Hi Jennifer. Your thoughts are appreciated. Such a wonderful thing to say about this little scribble of mine. Thank you for being so kind. I hope you have a very Merry Christmas as well. :) Brandy

Gerald Greene

Date: 12/21/2018 8:50:00 PM

So blue eyes makes you breathless, speechless and lost. Hmmm. I hope you can control yourself when we meet! Just kidding. But this is sensual and lovely.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/21/2018 10:20:00 PM

I am blushing, softly. Your thoughts bring a soft smile. :) If you have blue eyes, I am sure I would melt- if we met. You are so kind. Thank you Gerald for your wonderful thoughts. ~ Brandy

Winged Warrior

Date: 12/20/2018 7:26:00 PM

In your eyes, I see a captivating, mesmerizing & graceful poetess...capturing our hearts within the winds of infinity...with vistas of water falling words and a canvas of neverending colors...hi Brandy, how are you, my dear friend...hope you have a joyous and merry holiday season...love & light...^WW^...{*J*}

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/20/2018 8:28:00 PM

Awe, thank you my dear friend. Such a wonderful thing to say, about me and my poetry. Your thoughts are appreciated, as is your friendship. Many blessings to you. May you have a very Merry holiday season as well. :) Thank you for being here, for being You. ~ Brandy

Michael Wise

Date: 12/20/2018 5:01:00 PM

Elegant, sensual, and magical. Created great imagery in my mind! Very wonderfully moody piece.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/20/2018 6:54:00 PM

Thank you Michael. Many breathtaking moments linger within this little scribble of mine. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Phillip Garcia

Date: 12/20/2018 1:35:00 PM

Again with the blue eyes that render this soulful romantic lullaby, so wonderful in its tender touch that finds a distant cheek to caress, a sad tragedy to brown eyed readers. :( I love this, truly, the form plays perfectly with the playful words to create multiple layers for us to unbutton on our way down to the undressed finale. Well done, senora poet.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/20/2018 6:49:00 PM

Perhaps there is hope for those with brown eyes, such as myself. :) Just saying. Imagine if you will, the soft melody of the sea kissing delicate sand, or the other way around. Brown longing to touch blue. In poetry, such moments come true. Your thoughts bring a smile and make me blush. Thank you Phillip for your kind words. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 12/20/2018 9:22:00 AM

Mmm, silky skin caressed by hungry eyes and a pair of lips making beautiful music together, your poetry leaves me breathless, Brandy. This is so beautifully written within the constraints of this form, well done my dear friend! Merry Christmas! John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/20/2018 10:24:00 AM

Thank you John. Your comment is so soft and poetic. Simply breathtaking. It is wonderful when hungry eyes can create a beautiful mood. Undress the magic. Awe, I know, but I can't help it. Blue eyes melt me. :) Your thoughts are appreciated. Merry Christmas my friend. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf
Date: 12/20/2018 9:23:00 AM

...and once again you are lusting for the blue eyes ;)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/20/2018 7:59:00 AM

Playful at its best! This is a tremendous write, Brandy. A romantic tease from start to end. I think the last stanza is especially well done..and love the ending lines: but then you go undress the magic,with hungry eyes of tender blue.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/20/2018 10:14:00 AM

Yes, playful moments indeed. :) Thank you Vijay. There is something magical about a touch, being surrounded by absolute bliss- a sweet sensual kiss. Your thoughts bring a smile. You and your thoughts are always appreciated. ~ Brandy

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/20/2018 7:04:00 AM

Romantical, sentimental and heart-felt. A winning trifecta. I am in awe.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/20/2018 10:11:00 AM

Thank you Caren. Such a wonderful thing to say. I appreciate you and your thoughts. :) Brandy