Laura Leiser Poet Limerick

Hungry Critter

While camping up high in the trees
I woke up one “mourning” to pee
Thought that I heard a “bare”
But it was only a “hair”
Who was eating my breakfast with tea. 





Written on 3/21/2016

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty March 29, 2016 at 7:08 AM bare>hair> pee, well, let's have peas in the breakfast with cheese please. Love. Laura Leiser March 29, 2016 at 12:12 PM Thanks, Rajat! Glad you liked this :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 29, 2016 at 3:12 AM Yet another lovely win Laura.. big congrats! Laura Leiser March 29, 2016 at 12:11 PM Thank you, Dr. Upma :)

Eve Roper March 28, 2016 at 7:33 PM this is a hilarious write, Laura, congratulations on your win :) Laura Leiser March 29, 2016 at 12:11 PM Thank you, Eve :)

Sandra Haight March 28, 2016 at 3:20 PM Laura, great write! Congratulations on your win in the Wordplay Extravaganza contest! Hugs, Sandra Laura Leiser March 29, 2016 at 12:11 PM Thank you, Sandra :)

Jan Allison March 28, 2016 at 1:55 PM Many congrats Laura:-) hugs Jan xx Laura Leiser March 29, 2016 at 12:10 PM Thanks, Jan :)

Lindsay Laurie March 21, 2016 at 6:00 PM G'day Laura ... nice play with words - Lindsay Laura Leiser March 21, 2016 at 7:07 PM Thanks, Lindsay, glad you liked it :)

Jan Allison March 21, 2016 at 5:16 PM very funny Laura good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Laura Leiser March 21, 2016 at 7:07 PM Thank, Jan :)