Hungry Cat

the hungry cat - - by her Master's still form lies unopened mail © oct 26 2011 cgh
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Dietrich Avatar
October 30, 2011 at 10:20 PM
I really like this one too. For me you are doing mainly senryu because they are all evoking human emotion for me,not nature. They are really fun to read.
Brown Avatar
October 28, 2011 at 8:24 AM
Thank you for your always kind comments on my writing Charles. It is a pleasure to read your poetry this fine day. Hoping you have an amazing weekend. Love, Carol
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October 26, 2011 at 10:26 AM
Quite moving...it would read great with the 1st and 3rd lines switched...I love Haiku..wish I was better at it. Thanks for all your blogs trying to teach us a thing or two.BG
Song Avatar
October 26, 2011 at 8:06 AM
Awww. Charles. Is this a scene from your life..? As you lie on the couch passed out from a long day, the cat is meowing and you have mail piled up all around? ha ha. I love this very powerful haiku. A new favorite. :) I know some great housekeepers. Gwendolen
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