Seren Roberts Poet Pleiades

Hunger- Pleiades Contest

Hunger

have a notion you might
hallucinate, we are
holding bodies so close,
hurting me, when you squeezed
hand tightly, emotions,
have shown us we are one,
hungering for our love.


written in Pleiades Form


penned 20/2/2017

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Anne-Lise Andresen February 24, 2017 at 2:31 AM - Congratulations on your great poem in Pleiades H contest, Seren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Seren Roberts February 24, 2017 at 2:35 AM Hello Anne-Lise thanks for stopping by ...Seren

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 24, 2017 at 1:07 AM Love the passionate take on hunger...great write! Congrats to you, Seren! Hugs, Rhonda Seren Roberts February 24, 2017 at 2:36 AM Hello Rhonda nice to see you these days....Seren

Eve Roper February 23, 2017 at 11:46 PM Very good :) a 7 and congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich February 23, 2017 at 7:58 PM REally like yours, Seren. Congrats on the win. Seren Roberts February 24, 2017 at 2:33 AM Hi Andrea ... thanks...Seren

Kim Merryman February 23, 2017 at 6:29 PM Creative way to depict hunger. Steamy! Great work, Seren. Congrats on your win! Blessings Seren Roberts February 24, 2017 at 2:33 AM thanks Kim....Seren

Arthur Vaso February 20, 2017 at 9:55 PM Seren, that one melted me, you really, you really, well ................... Seren Roberts February 21, 2017 at 11:14 PM ok ok you can have another rum and coke ....Seren

Tim Smith February 20, 2017 at 6:07 PM I'm hungering for some chips...awesome Seren Seren Roberts February 21, 2017 at 11:13 PM Oh my you lead a sheltered life Tim haha....Seren

James Inman February 20, 2017 at 5:48 PM Seren, a sweet write. Don't squeeze too tightly. Seren Roberts February 21, 2017 at 11:15 PM lol is sweet the right word......thx James for commenting.....Seren

Jan Allison February 20, 2017 at 4:55 PM Hope that hunger is soon satisfied ... love the take on the H theme good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Seren Roberts February 21, 2017 at 11:16 PM lol Jan meanwhile will join Tim help him to eat his chips....Seren