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Hunger Insides noisy Thoughts of food Mind whirling Thoughts of you Hunger for more Than can fill Feed? What you feed Grows stronger still Starve the wanting flesh Weakening Emptiness In my gut In my soul In my spirit Hunger and desire Want and need Distinguishing In Between Fill this need Feel this need Fulfill this need.

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Date: 9/11/2024 10:48:00 AM
Sex and food, the two great lusts combined into one ultimate longing. Now let me read that self control poem of yours again lol
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/11/2024 3:55:00 PM
Yep. So true
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Crystol Woods
Date: 9/11/2024 3:17:00 PM
It's whichever we feed more that will strengthen and win out... if we fill our flesh with what it desires it will grow stronger. If we feed it spirit with the word then our spirit grows stronger. Xo
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Crystol Woods
Date: 9/11/2024 3:15:00 PM
Lol I guess it's obvious what God is teaching me this week lol! Xo
Date: 9/10/2024 1:21:00 PM
No doubt you read this to your Hubs. Hope you've planned for the weekend getaway!!! Clever fun. :o))
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Crystol Woods
Date: 9/11/2024 8:14:00 AM
He's pretty supportive of my writing so that's a blessing! Awe...a weekend getaway sounds great! Thanks for your consistent encouragement Arlo! Xo

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