Hunger

I sit watch want to weep
seeing you sitting on the street
with cane made of wood
hand carved  not very good
a banged up sign in hand
sitting unable to stand
cars just pass you by
my heart wants to cry
no one worrying how you fare
a world that does not care
two cigarettes in a empty hat
hair tangled in a mat
 you sit wish me well
as you sit for a spell
a homeless man down on his luck
hoping to get even a buck
i took him coffee wished him well
he was grateful I could tell.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 11/19/2019 8:17:00 PM
Making a needy happy is far better than all your prayers. U just made a good poem of an everyday scene many forget .,..u do have a heart that has concern ...great going
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Date: 6/27/2019 9:11:00 PM
Hello Phyllis … I can't imagine what living on the street during winter would be like. Just a small act with a helping hand can mean so much - thanks Phyllis - Lindsay
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/12/2019 3:41:00 PM
Thanks Lindsay yes small acts is what we all should do you never know whose day you can make. Enjoying a nice summer and picking my raspberries. love phyl
Date: 6/25/2019 5:19:00 PM
Something its the little things we do that matter most Phyllis, just your presence and a warm coffee made a world of difference for that day I'm sure. Your such a kind soul. thank you for sharing, have a blessed evening.xo
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Date: 7/12/2019 3:42:00 PM
Thank you for your comment much appreciated. love phyl
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