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Hung

Our hearts can't touch, our minds deflect Absurd conclusions, I'll regret Breaking up so many times Your reasons do not rhyme I think I better off this way I love you, that's what i will lay Rupturing my soul, hope that I can Last breath. . Goodbye. . 'til we meet again 061314 (13:50) An entry to "Breaking Up With You" contest Sponsored by: Poet Destroyer 6th Place

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Beata Agustin

Date: 12/14/2024 9:08:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/21/2014 9:38:00 PM

thank you for the reply...Linda

Skat A

Date: 6/20/2014 6:04:00 PM

Jeriel, Congratulations, awesome breaking up poem....... SKAT

Jeriel Del Rosario
Date: 6/21/2014 6:38:00 AM

thanks you SKAT :) :)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/19/2014 8:37:00 AM

Congratulations, Jerial, on a well-deserved, big win! Excellent, clever write that I thoroughly enjoyed! Warm regards.

Jeriel Del Rosario
Date: 6/21/2014 6:38:00 AM

Thank you! :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/19/2014 6:55:00 AM

Congratulations on a fine win in Breaking up contest, jerial

Jeriel Del Rosario
Date: 6/21/2014 6:38:00 AM

Thanks Sir :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/19/2014 1:13:00 AM

Jeriel.. Congratulations, and thank you so much for enjoying, my contest. I enjoyed every poem, on my Breaking up contest. I can sit here, and say I truly enjoyed every entry, even the few that chose not to follow my rules... LOL, Love LINDA

Jeriel Del Rosario
Date: 6/21/2014 6:37:00 AM

thanks Linda! :) im looking to join your next contest again :) thanks thanks :)