Humpty Dumpty

People yelled to Humpty Dumpty, “DON'T FALL!” But Humpty never listens, he's a stubborn butterball Came tumbling down His undies turned brown “Not The Brightest Egg” someone did call © Jack Ellison 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Eastman Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 9:55 AM
Humpty fell down on his a**... and he didn't have much class... He threw explective deletives to all... Both great and small... who were making omletes of him over in the grass... Ummm... Youse guys... That was terrible too... The ambulance is coming... So hurry up and chew... what did you think... I said in a blink... I'm not very classy too...
Ellison Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 10:08 AM
You is really getting into the swing of it, I must say! Limericks are usually not very classy anyway!!! xxxxxx
Nance Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 8:00 AM
hahaa well that is a good take on the story!
Ellison Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 8:04 AM
Strange take you mean!!! LOL Big huggeroonies, my dear sweet Casarah! xxx
Allison Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 7:33 AM
maybe his brain was a bit scrambled Jack! Hugs Jan xx
Ellison Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 7:40 AM
"scrambled" LOL I get it... scrambled... egg... the yolks on me!!!! Hugs Jacko xxxx
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace