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Humpty Dumpty

People yelled to Humpty Dumpty, “DON'T FALL!” But Humpty never listens, he's a stubborn butterball Came tumbling down His undies turned brown “Not The Brightest Egg” someone did call © Jack Ellison 2015

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Date: 3/18/2015 9:55:00 AM
Humpty fell down on his a**... and he didn't have much class... He threw explective deletives to all... Both great and small... who were making omletes of him over in the grass... Ummm... Youse guys... That was terrible too... The ambulance is coming... So hurry up and chew... what did you think... I said in a blink... I'm not very classy too...
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/18/2015 10:08:00 AM
You is really getting into the swing of it, I must say! Limericks are usually not very classy anyway!!! xxxxxx
Date: 3/18/2015 8:00:00 AM
hahaa well that is a good take on the story!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/18/2015 8:04:00 AM
Strange take you mean!!! LOL Big huggeroonies, my dear sweet Casarah! xxx
Date: 3/18/2015 7:33:00 AM
maybe his brain was a bit scrambled Jack! Hugs Jan xx
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/18/2015 7:40:00 AM
"scrambled" LOL I get it... scrambled... egg... the yolks on me!!!! Hugs Jacko xxxx

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