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Humpty - the Coroners Hearing

Humpty – The Coroner’s Hearing Humpty Dumpty had a great fall, Of that there can be no dispute. The Kings Men should have done better, Their diagnosis was not absolute. We couldn’t put him back together, All the Kings Horses said. There was nothing we could do Sir, Humpty Dumpty was dead. And why was Humpty sat on the wall, Without a proper risk assessment. So, in conclusion I must report, All the Kings Men were negligent. Revised for the Humpty Dumpty contest 27.6.18 - sponsored by Faraz

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Date: 7/8/2018 10:09:00 PM
Kevin, a great painting of Humpty Dumpty. Congratulations on your awesome win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/8/2018 8:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. So cute! Well done! :)
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Date: 7/7/2018 8:42:00 AM
Poor humpty dumpty, you are right, all kings men were negligent, many congratulations on your win in the contest, good luck and have a really nice day
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Kevin Shaw
Date: 7/7/2018 4:10:00 PM
Thank you, Faraz, kind regards, Kevin
Date: 6/15/2017 7:47:00 PM
This supposes he was given no choice. Good one Kevin...
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Date: 6/15/2017 5:42:00 PM
Hilarious poem Kevin - they were definitely negligent and he should go to injury lawyers for you lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/15/2017 5:46:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I must admit to amusing myself with this one xx

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