hummingbird oasis

firey spirit
rainbow colored wings floating
bird bath water cool
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodrigues Avatar
June 10, 2025 at 7:09 PM
Cool as those rainbow wings :)
Jones Avatar
June 10, 2025 at 7:38 PM
Hugs :0)
Dietrich Avatar
June 10, 2025 at 12:54 PM
A pretty picture. If for a contest, make sure the last line has one less syllable than it has right now.
Dietrich Avatar
June 10, 2025 at 3:35 PM
Nice!
Jones Avatar
June 10, 2025 at 1:32 PM
Not for contest but will correct thanks sweetie!
Rodgers Avatar
June 10, 2025 at 11:00 AM
Dear Karen, your hummingbird oasis is a burst of color and soul just like fire and rainbow, floating above cool water. Oh, how even the smallest things such as wings on the breeze, a sip from the birdbath can spark joy and wonder turning ordinary days into something magical. Blessings, My Dear Karen, Daniel
Jones Avatar
June 10, 2025 at 11:18 AM
You’re so right! Have a blessed day as well Daniel!
May Avatar
June 10, 2025 at 4:05 AM
Nice imagery Karen, best wishers
Jones Avatar
June 10, 2025 at 5:51 AM
Thanks Joseph!
Edmonds  Avatar
June 10, 2025 at 1:50 AM
That’s lovely Karen, birds love a bath, to have a splash… Beryl
Jones Avatar
June 10, 2025 at 5:51 AM
Yes they do! :0)
Wolf Avatar
June 9, 2025 at 11:45 PM
'Cool,' the last word in the poem, works in a few different ways for me. Love it when that happens. Thanks, Karen!
Jones Avatar
June 10, 2025 at 12:33 AM
Aw thank YOU Gershon for reading!
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