Tanya Harrington Poet Rhyme

Hummingbird Love

Whirling, twirling lovers fly
Falling through the tree tops high.
Taking hold with all their might
Swirling love, alive in flight.
Floating down upon the breeze
Spinning round like maple seeds.
Holding tight, not letting go
Nearly touching down below,
Pulling free, then giving chase
Longing for another taste.
Calling out their sweethearts tune
Hoping for another boon.
Pairing up, one more time,
Sipping nectar so divine!


Tanya Harrington
For: Good Enough Contest

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Poet Destroyer A May 19, 2013 at 1:13 PM Hello Tanya, how are you.. a lovely feeling that flutters right through the heart... I love this poem so much, I think I've read the poem over 5 times already... always~ Linda

Olusegun Arowolo November 1, 2012 at 9:59 PM Wonderful piece,Tanya..I love this...Congratulations on your HM in this contest..Kudos to you,pal...

Andrea Dietrich November 1, 2012 at 2:30 PM Oh, MY romance in the SKY. Love this one. I'd have put it higher on the list. Congrats, sweetie. (I liked it just as much seeing it this second time)

Kash Poet October 30, 2012 at 1:54 PM Wonderful poem here Tanya!Congrats on the win.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2012 at 11:28 AM Congratulations on your winning poems in the "Good Enough" contest. - Oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun October 30, 2012 at 7:32 AM This is so beautiful! Congratulations on your win, Tanya! hugs:) LG

Carol Sunshine Brown October 30, 2012 at 7:06 AM Congratulations on your winning poem in SandyIvy's "Good Enough" contest Tany. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 29, 2012 at 11:38 PM CONGRATS TANYA ON WINNING AN HM FOR THIS FABULOUS WRITE LUV .. AWESOME PIECE ..

Joyce Johnson October 29, 2012 at 10:21 PM Who would have thought. Very cute tale. congratulations Tanya. Love, Joyce

Poet Destroyer A October 29, 2012 at 8:25 PM Tanya.. Congratulations with your wonderful and "Good Enough" poem in Sandy's contest. xox~PD

Sandy Ivy D October 29, 2012 at 7:22 PM :-) love your good win' thank you' Sandy

Poet Destroyer A September 14, 2012 at 2:32 PM Here is another wonderful win,, love re-reading this one again... the image is outstanding.. No wonder picky Brian, adored the view... xox~pd

Jack Horne August 11, 2012 at 2:04 PM truly beautiful write, Tanya

Andrea Dietrich August 10, 2012 at 10:50 PM Did I tell you this reminds me of the little birds who built nests above my garage this summer. So sweet.

Nette Onclaud August 10, 2012 at 6:50 PM i get a great poetic kick out of this, tanya...enjoyed the hinner scene and rhyming schene.. so goood!?") huggs!

James Tate August 10, 2012 at 4:44 PM Wow, I can see the hummer in flight. Good work.

Carol Sunshine Brown August 10, 2012 at 6:29 AM Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Brian's "#195" contest Tanya. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A August 9, 2012 at 9:10 PM th.. congratulations with your awesome win. Hoping to read many contest tonight. always~ ;-) PD

Harry Horsman August 9, 2012 at 9:59 AM beautiful poem, Tanya, love the flow and sincerity.

Carol Eastman August 9, 2012 at 8:28 AM Congratulations on the win. A very interesting poem.

Andrea Dietrich August 8, 2012 at 3:43 PM ALL RIGHT. I see one of my favorite poems also made Brian's top of his list! Congrats. And congrats on your win in the Lost contest too.

Terry O'Leary August 8, 2012 at 3:00 PM Congrats on a spendid win! Terry

Andrea Dietrich August 7, 2012 at 9:21 PM This is one of my favorite poems I've read tonight. I enjoy its brevity and lyrical quality! So pretty.

Joann Grisetti August 6, 2012 at 7:17 PM Beautiful picture you have drawn with your words.

Robert Pettit August 6, 2012 at 5:26 PM Only Seals and Crofts could describe those wonderful speedy birds better than this. Good rhyming and descriptiveness.

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