Eve Roper Poet Haiku

Hummingbird Haiku

hummingbirds flitter
keen to get to the next bloom
dawns wake, wet showers

7/24/2018


Poetry Contest: Bird themed haiku 
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

I have these beautiful tiny birds flying around when my flowers are in bloom;
 they are magical to watch.

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John Watt May 9, 2020 at 1:35 AM I do love hummingbirds, Eve. This charming haiku does them justice. I can just watch them all morning. Hugs ~ John

Eric Boddie July 30, 2018 at 10:12 PM a bird that hums so....i really don't truly know....still, words make me go....sweet write mrs roper....;)

Moon Flower July 30, 2018 at 6:13 AM Love the imagery being used. And congrats on your fine win, Eve. hugs. :)

Paul Callus July 29, 2018 at 1:22 PM That is a very pretty image which you project, Eve! You are lucky to have such lovely birds frequenting your garden. Congrats on your fine win. Hugs // paul

Michelle Faulkner July 29, 2018 at 1:13 PM Back to wish you congratulations, well done!

Virginia Waters July 28, 2018 at 5:32 PM Congratulations on your win.

Susan Gentry July 28, 2018 at 5:28 PM Congratulations on your win. Beautiful haiku! :) Eve Roper July 28, 2018 at 5:32 PM Thank you, Susan.. Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich July 27, 2018 at 8:15 PM Pretty, Eve!! Congrats for your win Eve Roper July 27, 2018 at 8:21 PM Thank you.. Hugs Eve

Jean Murray July 27, 2018 at 6:20 PM Beautiful Eve. Congratulations. Eve Roper July 27, 2018 at 8:21 PM Thank you.. Hugs Eve

Janice Canerdy July 27, 2018 at 6:07 PM CONGRATS, EVE! Janice Eve Roper July 27, 2018 at 8:21 PM Thank you.. Hugs Eve

Joseph May July 27, 2018 at 8:17 AM Beautiful write Eve...Congrats on your win Eve Roper July 27, 2018 at 8:21 PM Thank you.. Hugs Eve

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 27, 2018 at 6:30 AM They are magical! Spellbinding :) Congrats on your win with this lovely haiku, xomo Eve Roper July 27, 2018 at 8:20 PM Thank you.. Hugs Eve

Line Gauthier July 27, 2018 at 5:55 AM Congrats on your win, Eve. Eve Roper July 27, 2018 at 8:20 PM Thank you.. Hugs Eve

Tania Kitchin July 27, 2018 at 4:56 AM Congratulations on your win, nicely done, I really liked this and could imagine many hummingbirds feeding after wet showers.

Roy Pett July 25, 2018 at 5:58 PM Lovely Haiku Eve, would love to see hummingbirds in the wild only ever seen them on tv. :)) Eve Roper July 26, 2018 at 5:17 PM Roy, they are very beautiful. Thank you. Hugs Eve

Silent One July 25, 2018 at 4:45 PM I have never seen one here in the UK.... Great haiku Eve.. Eve Roper July 26, 2018 at 5:16 PM Thank you. Hugs Eve

Michelle Faulkner July 25, 2018 at 1:25 PM Love hummingbirds, I have a necklace with a picture of one, good luck in the contest! Eve Roper July 26, 2018 at 5:16 PM Thank you. :) they are so beautiful Hugs Eve

Ralph Sergi July 25, 2018 at 8:26 AM Hi Eve: This poem evokes a time in Mexico when I first saw a hummingbird! A beautiful Haiku! Beat of luck! Eve Roper July 25, 2018 at 11:39 AM Thank you Ralph, such a beautiful amazing little bird :) & for the luck .Hugs Eve

Tom Cunningham July 24, 2018 at 11:25 PM Lovely hakiu Eve can see the image. Good luck. Tom Eve Roper July 25, 2018 at 11:37 AM Thank you :) and for the good luck Tom. Hugs Eve