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Hummingbird Haiku

hummingbirds flitter
keen to get to the next bloom
dawns wake, wet showers

7/24/2018


Poetry Contest: Bird themed haiku 
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

I have these beautiful tiny birds flying around when my flowers are in bloom;
 they are magical to watch.

Copyright © Eve Roper | Year Posted 2018

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John Watt Date: 5/9/2020 1:35:00 AM I do love hummingbirds, Eve. This charming haiku does them justice. I can just watch them all morning. Hugs ~ John Login to Reply

Eric Boddie Date: 7/30/2018 10:12:00 PM a bird that hums so....i really don't truly know....still, words make me go....sweet write mrs roper....;) Login to Reply

Moon Flower Date: 7/30/2018 6:13:00 AM Love the imagery being used. And congrats on your fine win, Eve. hugs. :) Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 7/29/2018 1:22:00 PM That is a very pretty image which you project, Eve! You are lucky to have such lovely birds frequenting your garden. Congrats on your fine win. Hugs // paul Login to Reply

Michelle Faulkner Date: 7/29/2018 1:13:00 PM Back to wish you congratulations, well done! Login to Reply

Virginia Waters Date: 7/28/2018 5:32:00 PM Congratulations on your win. Login to Reply

Susan Gentry Date: 7/28/2018 5:28:00 PM Congratulations on your win. Beautiful haiku! :) Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 7/28/2018 5:32:00 PM Thank you, Susan.. Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/27/2018 8:15:00 PM Pretty, Eve!! Congrats for your win Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 7/27/2018 8:21:00 PM Thank you.. Hugs Eve

Jean Murray Date: 7/27/2018 6:20:00 PM Beautiful Eve. Congratulations. Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 7/27/2018 8:21:00 PM Thank you.. Hugs Eve

Janice Canerdy Date: 7/27/2018 6:07:00 PM CONGRATS, EVE! Janice Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 7/27/2018 8:21:00 PM Thank you.. Hugs Eve

Joseph May Date: 7/27/2018 8:17:00 AM Beautiful write Eve...Congrats on your win Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 7/27/2018 8:21:00 PM Thank you.. Hugs Eve

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 7/27/2018 6:30:00 AM They are magical! Spellbinding :) Congrats on your win with this lovely haiku, xomo Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 7/27/2018 8:20:00 PM Thank you.. Hugs Eve

Line Gauthier Date: 7/27/2018 5:55:00 AM Congrats on your win, Eve. Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 7/27/2018 8:20:00 PM Thank you.. Hugs Eve

Tania Kitchin Date: 7/27/2018 4:56:00 AM Congratulations on your win, nicely done, I really liked this and could imagine many hummingbirds feeding after wet showers. Login to Reply

Roy Pett Date: 7/25/2018 5:58:00 PM Lovely Haiku Eve, would love to see hummingbirds in the wild only ever seen them on tv. :)) Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 7/26/2018 5:17:00 PM Roy, they are very beautiful. Thank you. Hugs Eve

Silent One Date: 7/25/2018 4:45:00 PM I have never seen one here in the UK.... Great haiku Eve.. Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 7/26/2018 5:16:00 PM Thank you. Hugs Eve

Michelle Faulkner Date: 7/25/2018 1:25:00 PM Love hummingbirds, I have a necklace with a picture of one, good luck in the contest! Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 7/26/2018 5:16:00 PM Thank you. :) they are so beautiful Hugs Eve

Ralph Sergi Date: 7/25/2018 8:26:00 AM Hi Eve: This poem evokes a time in Mexico when I first saw a hummingbird! A beautiful Haiku! Beat of luck! Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 7/25/2018 11:39:00 AM Thank you Ralph, such a beautiful amazing little bird :) & for the luck .Hugs Eve

Tom Cunningham Date: 7/24/2018 11:25:00 PM Lovely hakiu Eve can see the image. Good luck. Tom Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 7/25/2018 11:37:00 AM Thank you :) and for the good luck Tom. Hugs Eve