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Hummingbird

delicate gypsy dancing betwixt the blossoms - hummingbird in flight Entered 2/6/12 in Tracie's Wow, What A Gem contest.

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Daver Austin

Date: 12/1/2014 6:09:00 PM

You capture the delicate scene very well. Love, daver

Bob Quigley

Date: 1/6/2012 1:48:00 PM

Congratulations Kim. Well done.

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/6/2012 8:59:00 AM

Congrats on your win in the contest. Thanks, bl

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/6/2012 7:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Any 2011 Poem" contest Kim. Love, Carol

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 9/21/2011 8:51:00 PM

Silly Rabbit... -----betwixt are for kids! LOL I love that word (betwixt) about as much as I love Haiku!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/19/2011 7:52:00 AM

It does appear as they are dancing...such a gorgeous sight! A wonderful haiku from you, KIm. Gwendolen

Kim Merryman
Date: 9/19/2011 8:30:00 AM

Thank you, Gwendolen. I'm glad you liked it. Kim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/18/2011 1:31:00 AM

what a pretty way to paint a hummingbird!!

Kim Merryman
Date: 9/19/2011 8:31:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. So glad you enjoyed it.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/16/2011 4:41:00 PM

sweetly vibrant Haiku Kim and a chart topping piece for sure with these delicate visuals luv..good luck in the contest...

Kim Merryman
Date: 9/16/2011 8:17:00 PM

Thank you, Linda-Marie. Kim

Nick Bagnall

Date: 9/16/2011 3:47:00 PM

Love the middle line of this one, well done.

Kim Merryman
Date: 9/16/2011 8:17:00 PM

Thank you, Nick. Glad you liked it. Kim

Jack Ross Jr.

Date: 9/16/2011 3:05:00 PM

Wonderful Haiku hummingbirds described so well, they are delightful...with love....old Jack....good luck on contest

Kim Merryman
Date: 9/16/2011 8:18:00 PM

Thank you, Jack. I'm glad you liked it. Kim