Hummingbird

Wound up toy hovers Mile-a-minute wings flapping Pretty hummingbird.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 9/1/2018 11:05:00 PM

Fun imagery, ML. Well done.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/2/2018 10:29:00 PM

Thank you, Line

Pashang Salehi

Date: 8/31/2018 2:04:00 AM

The only bird that can fly diagonally...

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/1/2018 1:24:00 PM

They are amazing...thanks

Anisha Dutta

Date: 8/30/2018 11:50:00 PM

Cute n sweet. I enjoyed

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/1/2018 1:24:00 PM

Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/30/2018 4:37:00 PM

Outstanding imagery my friend, MLK!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/1/2018 1:24:00 PM

Many thanks Demetrios.

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/30/2018 3:46:00 PM

Perfect. This one brought I smile. I see them every day here :)

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/1/2018 1:25:00 PM

You are blessed to be able to see them every day. There is a restaurant here where they have all sorts of flowers and when you eat on the porch, you can see finches and hummingbirds dining too. Thank you so much.