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Humming Streams

Hollows of anxieties dwell next to a frivolous stream, grey rolling stones in drizzles, scattered ashes from glowing ember. Oh! Ballads descend stealthily sprinkled along Luna's wings, they shimmer along the coast dissolving in whispering mist. I watch them blanket the stream in patterns of blue humming pearls, familiar memoirs bridge my worlds I stand on a bridge fusing my breath visible pain blending with invisible cure. I've been on a journey tracing these dreams holding a thread of frozen hopes, closer they seem, farther they move.. I chase along stranded trenches soothing trails of humming streams. July 26, 2020

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Date: 8/28/2020 8:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win, Aditi.
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Date: 8/27/2020 6:33:00 PM
Wonderful poetry, congratulations, on your number 1 placement,,love it..Stay safe...
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Date: 8/27/2020 5:57:00 PM
A wondrous write Aditi, congrats on another deserved win!
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Date: 8/27/2020 2:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your pen was at it again, a wonderful write. Enjoy your win and day..................
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Date: 8/13/2020 5:15:00 PM
Congratulations Aditi. I especially like the metaphor "...a thread of frozen hopes." Wonderful writing. Carry on. Best wishes Brian
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Date: 7/29/2020 9:36:00 AM
Congrats Aditi your win!
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Date: 7/28/2020 6:38:00 PM
Very beautiful and imaginative writing, my dear friend. You continue to amaze and inspire! I love the lines "familiar memoirs bridge my worlds" and "closer they seem, farther they move.." There's a sad and poignant tone to this one. Congratulations on your first place win ~ John
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Date: 7/28/2020 5:06:00 PM
I see you got a top win? No wonder! Such stunning imagery. Congratulations, Aditi.
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Date: 7/28/2020 5:04:00 AM
Your words sizzle in this write. Congrats on the number one spot! Well done.
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Date: 7/28/2020 2:23:00 AM
Congrats on top win!
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Date: 7/27/2020 10:57:00 AM
Congrats once again another top spot! Great talent! Keep it up!!
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Date: 7/26/2020 9:02:00 PM
Congrats on your top win!:)
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Date: 7/26/2020 3:26:00 PM
Congrats my friend for your TOP win in Brian's contest with this emotive, brilliant write. Well done, as always, Aditi.
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Date: 7/26/2020 2:23:00 PM
the wondrous wonderment of life in motion is there for all to see and feel, few do my poetic friend, my soul soars to know you do...my first thought after reading your poem
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