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Humming Bird

For Raul's contest Fast, buzzing bird wings Drink the sweet nectar in flight; Amazing design

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/27/2010 12:43:00 PM
YOu described the picture exactly. Thanks for the explanation of bream.It helps make the poem even clearer.Bye now. I go home for lunch finally. Andrea
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Date: 4/26/2010 5:03:00 PM
thanks for comment great hiaku your welcome we have greater creator
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Date: 4/26/2010 1:07:00 PM
Good poem Doris. Should do well in the contest, should you enter. Didn't mean to mislead anyone with my J. Ray poem, but he provided the building, funds, and incentive to start the one in Florence only. Not the entire program. Peace ---Charles
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Date: 4/26/2010 12:50:00 PM
amazing write dear..Charma
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Date: 4/26/2010 12:34:00 PM
What a pretty picture u paint with your words Doris.. good luck in the contest.. and so glad u got a good chuckle out of my entry for Matt's new contest... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/26/2010 6:11:00 AM
Great write that should be in the winner's circle..Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing...Mom
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Date: 4/26/2010 5:59:00 AM
Good luck,Doris you will do well in the contest,..pd.
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