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For pleiades H contest.

Humility

Humility

Hardened hearts, harbor hate
Haughty eyes, penetrate
Honest folks congregate
Holy Spirit conflates
Happiness permeates
Humankind celebrates
Humility is great.

For Kim Merrymans H pleiades contest
Feb 19,2016

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Terry O'Leary Date: 3/9/2017 4:34:00 PM Nice flow, well (mono)rhymed! Terry Login to Reply John Hamilton Date: 3/9/2017 4:56:00 PM Thanks Terry I appreciate it!

Funom Makama Date: 3/6/2017 11:14:00 AM Great work, really inspiring and incredible. Login to Reply John Hamilton Date: 3/6/2017 1:37:00 PM Thanks Funom.

Lisa Ricci Date: 2/28/2017 11:48:00 PM Now its my turn to say to you I'm late in joining the party. The theme speaks of humanity. Your first line speaks volumes and is so very true as does you ending. Congratulations on your win and for executing the format as well. Login to Reply John Hamilton Date: 3/1/2017 8:41:00 AM Thanks Lisa for the visit and comment, much appreciated!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 2/24/2017 10:38:00 AM Wonderful message, John, and I like how you rhymed yours. BIG congrats! Hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply John Hamilton Date: 2/24/2017 10:49:00 AM Thanks a lot Rhonda, it came with a deep message that few were able to grasp I fear! I'm glad you could see it!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/24/2017 2:36:00 AM - Congratulations on your great poem in Pleiades H contest, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply John Hamilton Date: 2/24/2017 9:11:00 AM Thanks a lot Anne-Lise

Eve Roper Date: 2/23/2017 11:40:00 PM Very good :) a 7 and congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve Login to Reply John Hamilton Date: 2/24/2017 9:10:00 AM Thanks again for your kind words!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/23/2017 7:52:00 PM I like how the lines kept adding up to the wonderful finish on humility! Congrats on a job very well done, John. Login to Reply John Hamilton Date: 2/23/2017 9:22:00 PM Glad you noticed that was the idea the contrasting quality that gradually transformed by Gods power into humility, we can't do it on our own for sure, thanks for your visits and comments!

Joseph May Date: 2/23/2017 6:49:00 PM I like how you did this in Monorhyme John...Congrats on your win Login to Reply John Hamilton Date: 2/23/2017 9:20:00 PM Thanks Joseph, yours was great too.

Kim Merryman Date: 2/23/2017 6:09:00 PM A unique and creative way to depict "humility" and good use of monorhyme. Congrats on your win, John! Blessings, Kim Login to Reply John Hamilton Date: 2/23/2017 9:19:00 PM Thanks Kim, was an excellent contest, thanks for sponsoring!

Joanna Daniel Date: 2/22/2017 7:14:00 AM Wonderful monorhyme Pleiades, John:) great word too:) Login to Reply John Hamilton Date: 2/22/2017 12:50:00 PM Thanks Jo, there are a lot of good ones, in this contest, including yours.

Heidi Sands Date: 2/20/2017 9:14:00 AM I like how you put together this one, John! Excellent. Login to Reply John Hamilton Date: 2/20/2017 11:29:00 AM Thanks Heidi, I appreciate your visit and comment!

Laura Leiser Date: 2/19/2017 8:32:00 PM God loves the humble heart..and your wonderful pleiades described it well! GL in the contest :) Login to Reply John Hamilton Date: 2/19/2017 9:51:00 PM Thanks Laura, humility triumphs over pride ever time, with Gods help.

Daniel Turner Date: 2/19/2017 7:19:00 PM I believe it is also a virtue, John. It is definitely a great attribute. Love the write:) Login to Reply John Hamilton Date: 2/19/2017 9:50:00 PM Thanks Danny, it sounds like a contradiction, or an oxymoron, but humility is great, as an attribute it is excelling. Thanks for your visit and comment!