Mark Martin Poet Pleiades

Humanity Pleiades

Hard-headed arrogance
Hating nameless masses
Hasty self destruction
Heroes unexpected
Humility brings peace
Heartfelt nourishing love
Healing forgiving hope


Written 18th February 2017

Entry to "Pleiades H" contest

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 24, 2017 at 2:58 PM I love how you wrote your Pleiades from negative to positive...very creative! Congrats, Rhonda Mark Martin February 24, 2017 at 3:11 PM Thank you Rhonda for you comment and for taking the time to read my poem. All the best! Mark :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen February 24, 2017 at 2:39 AM - Congratulations on your great poem in Pleiades H contest, Mark :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Mark Martin February 24, 2017 at 3:07 PM Thanks Anne-Lise! All the best! Mark :-)

Eve Roper February 23, 2017 at 11:38 PM Back to congratulate you Hugs Eve Mark Martin February 24, 2017 at 12:48 AM Thanks Eve! :-)

Andrea Dietrich February 23, 2017 at 7:48 PM great job doing one on humanity, Mark. Congrats for your win. Mark Martin February 23, 2017 at 11:21 PM Thanks Andrea! All the best! Mark :-)

Kim Merryman February 23, 2017 at 5:59 PM Mark, you have shown many facets of humanity in this well-written Pleiades! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim Mark Martin February 23, 2017 at 11:19 PM Thank you Kim for reading my poem and for running the contest. All the best! Mark :-)

John Hamilton February 18, 2017 at 7:29 PM Nice flowing pleiades starting from the negative, merging quickly to the positive leading to hope, really well done, should do well in the contest. Mark Martin February 19, 2017 at 12:28 AM Thanks John! :-)

Eve Roper February 18, 2017 at 4:43 PM I like the first one my mom and dad always called us hard-headed and "S" growing up, it leaves a lot of us scared.. or better for it... Good luck in the contest.. Thank you so very much for reading my poem :) Hugs Eve Mark Martin February 19, 2017 at 12:43 AM I remember the same encouragement from my teachers! Thanks for your comment Eve - all the best! Mark :-)