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Humanity Pleiades

Hard-headed arrogance Hating nameless masses Hasty self destruction Heroes unexpected Humility brings peace Heartfelt nourishing love Healing forgiving hope Written 18th February 2017 Entry to "Pleiades H" contest

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/24/2017 2:58:00 PM

I love how you wrote your Pleiades from negative to positive...very creative! Congrats, Rhonda

Mark Martin
Date: 2/24/2017 3:11:00 PM

Thank you Rhonda for you comment and for taking the time to read my poem. All the best! Mark :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/24/2017 2:39:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great poem in Pleiades H contest, Mark :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mark Martin
Date: 2/24/2017 3:07:00 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise! All the best! Mark :-)

Eve Roper

Date: 2/23/2017 11:38:00 PM

Back to congratulate you Hugs Eve

Mark Martin
Date: 2/24/2017 12:48:00 AM

Thanks Eve! :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2017 7:48:00 PM

great job doing one on humanity, Mark. Congrats for your win.

Mark Martin
Date: 2/23/2017 11:21:00 PM

Thanks Andrea! All the best! Mark :-)

Kim Merryman

Date: 2/23/2017 5:59:00 PM

Mark, you have shown many facets of humanity in this well-written Pleiades! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

Mark Martin
Date: 2/23/2017 11:19:00 PM

Thank you Kim for reading my poem and for running the contest. All the best! Mark :-)

John Hamilton

Date: 2/18/2017 7:29:00 PM

Nice flowing pleiades starting from the negative, merging quickly to the positive leading to hope, really well done, should do well in the contest.

Mark Martin
Date: 2/19/2017 12:28:00 AM

Thanks John! :-)

Eve Roper

Date: 2/18/2017 4:43:00 PM

I like the first one my mom and dad always called us hard-headed and "S" growing up, it leaves a lot of us scared.. or better for it... Good luck in the contest.. Thank you so very much for reading my poem :) Hugs Eve

Mark Martin
Date: 2/19/2017 12:43:00 AM

I remember the same encouragement from my teachers! Thanks for your comment Eve - all the best! Mark :-)