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Humanity Insanity

Humanity Insanity What’s the difference between humanity and insanity? The insane is a unique version of the membrane The insane play by themselves Like the last toys on the shelves The ones with defects But with the right love and care they work just like the perfects The soldiers march The dolls spin When will I get to see you again? My friend from within Where have you gone Its been so long No one understands me like you do We were a perfect pair number one and two Now your lost Please come back to me I need to talk Youll be my friend Until the end I hope you don’t betray me I hope you don’t slay me Im not a dragon But I am sure braggin About my best friend You My number two We go together like chick and peas I bless you when you sneeze Youll be with me til im dead To bad your just a friend In my head But with my imagination And my creativity you will be free I will free you from within me We can laugh we can cry Well say hello but not goodbye Cause my best friend you My number two

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Date: 1/26/2010 5:03:00 AM
Interesting the way you explored friendship from both ends of the spectrum -- humanity and insanity. We sometimes question the strength of friendships. True friends can help us through our periods of "insanity." Sounds like you found your soul mate, Steve. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/24/2010 11:18:00 AM
We all have a voice within us, you do not have to be insane to listen to it, and I believe we must be our own best friend first, before all else.... and heck I just liked your poem,it flowed very nicely and the concept is interesting and you did it very well, so hurray for you..
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Date: 1/23/2010 5:12:00 PM
LOL is it a definition of schizophrenia, good!! How Alice and the Mad Hatter! A real thrill ride..and I thought I had trouble with ADHD. Welcome back Light & Love
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Date: 1/23/2010 7:44:00 AM
Very nice write friend. Very creative with some wonderfully intresting imagery that brought a smile to my face. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 1/23/2010 6:58:00 AM
Interesting write in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 1/23/2010 6:50:00 AM
well written, I think we all used to have a great imagination when we were young. reminds me of trhe film small soldiers that was a great film and so funny. God bless you from diane
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