Home » Poems » Paula Goldsmith » Humanity - Gravity - Newton's Law

Humanity - Gravity - Newton's Law

Gravity makes things go down,
to the ground like a funny clown.
Missing the trash can,
now on the floor plan.
Gravity will always be around.

earthgigglelifesmiletimelimerick

♡Like0

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Suzanne Delaney

January 28, 2025 at 3:26 AM

ha ha Paula…that happens to me often but I blame my aim..LOL Fun Limerick. Hugs, SuZ

Paula Goldsmith

January 28, 2025 at 8:02 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Humanity - Gravity" write. It is Not our aim... I find gravity does Not always work. The story goes like this. I dropped something into the trash can "But" it did not go in. It went on the floor. OK!!! So where was down, "Gravity"??? I was Over the trash can. Gravity seemed to go to the side then down to the floor. Really??? Keep your feet on the ground as you write away..................

Joanna Daniel

January 28, 2025 at 2:47 AM

Well crafted limerick, Paula, I have no idea what to write for this contest...

Paula Goldsmith

January 28, 2025 at 7:57 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "Humanity - Gravity" write to be a, Well crafted limerick. You will think of something great to write about. This happened the other day so I wrote about it. I dropped something into the trash can "But" it did not go in. It went on the floor. OK!!! So where was down, "Gravity"??? That is why I wrote this. Keep your feet on the ground as you write away...............

Sam Kauffman

January 27, 2025 at 9:44 PM

So fun, Paula! Great take on gravity. Best wishes for the contest. Blessing!

Paula Goldsmith

January 28, 2025 at 7:53 AM

Thanks for your note and for your Best wishes for the contest. Glad you found my fun "Humanity - Gravity" write to be a, Great take on gravity. Here is the story... I dropped something into the trash can "But" it did not go in. It went on the floor. OK!!! So where was down, "Gravity"??? That is why I wrote this. Keep your feet on the ground as you write away...............

Gershon Wolf

January 26, 2025 at 6:44 PM

You'd think so. But who knows. Maybe we'll get to be like the moon...

Paula Goldsmith

January 27, 2025 at 10:41 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Humanity - Gravity" write. I find gravity does Not always work. The story goes like this. I dropped something into the trash can "But" it did not go in. It went on the floor. OK!!! So where was down, "Gravity"??? The Moon??? Maybe it would be better than this crazy earth world here. Keep your feet on the ground as you write away..................

Kim Rodrigues

January 24, 2025 at 1:55 PM

Couple crazy happenings..did the clown slip on a banana peel.

Paula Goldsmith

January 25, 2025 at 8:18 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Humanity - Gravity" write. Watch out for the clown & for a banana peel. Hahaha!!! The story goes like this. I dropped something into the trash can "But" it did not go in. It went on the floor. OK!!! So where was down, "Gravity"??? Keep your feet on the ground as you write away..................

Andrea Dietrich

January 24, 2025 at 11:41 AM

Up. Down and around!! Good one on gravity

Paula Goldsmith

January 24, 2025 at 12:35 PM

Thanks for your note & for your kind words. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Humanity - Gravity" write. This came from what happened the other day. I dropped something into the trash can "But" it did not go in. It went on the floor. OK!!! So where was down, "Gravity"??? Keep your feet on the ground as you write away..................

Heidi Sands

January 24, 2025 at 5:33 AM

I enjoyed your fun Limerick. Good one Paula. Have a great day :)

Paula Goldsmith

January 24, 2025 at 12:33 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Humanity - Gravity" write. It was fun to bring to life. The other day, I dropped something into the trash can "But" it did not go in. It went on the floor. OK!!! So where was down, "Gravity"??? That is why I wrote this. Keep your feet on the ground as you write away..................

Ink Empress

January 23, 2025 at 11:12 PM

Made me smile as i read the second line dear paula, you did a creative and fun one on the theme and prompt. Brilliant rhymes too in your limerick. I just wanted to also remind you to put the newtons law that youv used for this on the top of the poem, because contest requires that. Best wishes for the contest. Sending you light today and always

Paula Goldsmith

January 24, 2025 at 12:30 PM

Thanks for your note, Best wishes for the contest & for your kind words. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Humanity - Gravity" write & that it made you smile. I love to give out smiles. The other day, I dropped something into the trash can "But" it did not go in. It went on the floor. OK!!! So where was down, "Gravity"??? That is why I wrote this. Keep your feet on the ground as you write away..................

Jan Allison

January 23, 2025 at 1:31 PM

such an important discovery, well penned Paula:-) hugs jan xx

Paula Goldsmith

January 24, 2025 at 12:24 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "Humanity - Gravity" write to be, well penned. The other day, I dropped something into the trash can "But" it did not go in. It went on the floor. OK!!! So where was down, "Gravity"??? That is why I wrote this. Keep your feet on the ground as you write away...............

Victor Buhagiar

January 23, 2025 at 3:14 AM

Newton's discovery. Very important.

Paula Goldsmith

January 23, 2025 at 10:41 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Humanity - Gravity" write. It was a fun limerick to write. Yes, Newton's discovery was very important. Here my story... The other day, I dropped something into the trash can "But" it did not go in. It went on the floor. OK!!! So where was down, "Gravity"??? That is why I wrote this. Keep your feet on the ground as you write away..................

Michael Tor

January 22, 2025 at 9:51 PM

I love gravity it keeps me grounded, lol. Hope you liked that one Dear Paula. Hugs...

Paula Goldsmith

January 23, 2025 at 10:39 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Humanity - Gravity" write. It was a fun limerick to write. Gravity is a good thing. Here my story... The other day, I dropped something into the trash can "But" it did not go in. It went on the floor. OK!!! So where was down, "Gravity"??? That is why I wrote this. Hugs... Keep your feet on the ground as you write away........

Gershon Wolf

January 22, 2025 at 7:55 PM

Up in space, gravity loses pace. ... In vino, veritas. In gravitas, Cantiflas.

Paula Goldsmith

January 23, 2025 at 10:37 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Humanity - Gravity" write. It was a fun limerick to write. The other day, I dropped something into the trash can "But" it did not go in. It went on the floor. OK!!! So where was down, "Gravity"??? That is why I wrote this. Keep your feet on the ground as you write away..................

Beryl Edmonds

January 22, 2025 at 5:16 PM

A great Limerick Paula, if the world had no gravity, flying humans we’d all be… Beryl

Paula Goldsmith

January 23, 2025 at 10:36 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "Humanity - Gravity" write to be, A great Limerick. Flying around could be a fun thing. The other day, I dropped something into the trash can "But" it did not go in. It went on the floor. OK!!! So where was down, "Gravity"??? That is why I wrote this. Keep your feet on the ground as you write away...............

Joseph P. DiMino

January 22, 2025 at 4:27 PM

:) Yep. I once had a lot more chest and less belly.

Paula Goldsmith

January 23, 2025 at 10:34 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Humanity - Gravity" write. It was a fun limerick to write The years will change the body. My friend wanted to do a dating app but wanted to put a 25 year old picture on it. I said, really, are you crazy??? Life & Gravity can be a little crazy. Keep your feet on the ground as you write away..................

Andrea Dietrich

January 22, 2025 at 12:27 PM

A fun way to do this topic. Great LIM

Paula Goldsmith

January 23, 2025 at 10:27 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Humanity - Gravity" write. It was a fun limerick to write. Keep your feet on the ground as you write away..................

Eve Roper

January 22, 2025 at 11:57 AM

Newton’s law, so true. Well done, my friend.

Paula Goldsmith

January 23, 2025 at 10:26 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "Humanity - Gravity" write to be, Well done. The other day, I dropped something into the trash can "But" it did not go in. It went on the floor. OK!!! So where was down, "Gravity"??? That is why I wrote this. Keep your feet on the ground as you write away...............

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 22, 2025 at 11:16 AM

- An apple fell on Newton's head... it made him think... and he thought wisely :) - Great written, Paula :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

January 22, 2025 at 11:49 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "Humanity - Gravity" write to be, Great written. Hooray for Newton. The other day, I dropped something into the trash can "But" it did not go in. It went on the floor. OK!!! So where was down, "Gravity"??? That is why I wrote this. Hugs...Keep your feet on the ground as you write away.............

Sara Kendrick

January 22, 2025 at 11:06 AM

According to the laws that govern our world, but who knows what might happen in the future. Thanks for sharing this one with us. What if everything went up. We would be in a mess. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

January 22, 2025 at 11:45 AM

Oliver Mckeithan

January 22, 2025 at 10:15 AM

Well done on the Limerick.

Paula Goldsmith

January 22, 2025 at 11:42 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "Humanity - Gravity" write to be, Well done. It was so much fun to write. Keep your feet on the ground as you write away.............

John Read

January 22, 2025 at 9:56 AM

Hi Paula, gravity keeps our feet firmly on the ground, enjoyed reading your limerick poem. xx

Paula Goldsmith

January 22, 2025 at 11:40 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Humanity - Gravity" write. It was a fun limerick to write. Keep your feet on the ground as you write away.............

Paula Goldsmith

January 22, 2025 at 9:07 AM

Humanity - Gravity~Date Written:1/22/2025~Written By A Human Poet....

Humanity - Gravity - Newton's Law

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment

Member Area

Soup Social

Member Poems

Member Poets

Famous Poems

Famous Poets

Poetry Resources