Humanity

Humanity     

H umility is the capacity to
U nderstand that we
M ay not know
A ll of the answers, and we may
N ever fully comprehend all of the
I ntricasies  of the cosmos
T otally, however we continue to
Y earn, and to learn and to grow, until the end.


H appiness, seems to be a mystery,
U nderstanding how to achieve it
M ay seem to be a daunting task to
A ny one of us, or perhaps all of us, but we
N ever give up
I  n the quest, because,
T rue happiness continues to be the goal for
Y oung and old alike, especially in this complicated world


John Derek Hamilton
November 14,2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Payton Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 11:15 PM
Read loud and clear, great job John.
Hamilton Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 10:49 AM
Thanks Normie!
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 1, 2017 at 8:51 PM
Hello John this is so true. have a nice evenoing my friend.
Hamilton Avatar
December 1, 2017 at 8:53 PM
Thanks Darlene
Gauthier Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 10:20 AM
Delightful acrostic. Well done, John.
Hamilton Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 7:51 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate the nice visit and comment!
Dutta Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 12:31 PM
Very good examples are set. let me try
Hamilton Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 12:57 PM
Thanks Anisha, looking forward to your entry!
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 11:11 AM
These are glowing examples John! If a person obtains happiness, they have everything! : )
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 1:48 AM
I will probably post it within the next day or so. Thanks John! : )
Hamilton Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 12:56 PM
So true Connie, looking forward to your entry!
Smith Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 10:48 AM
You did these so well John, I hope it hasn't diverted your energy away from your lyrics... best wishes.
Hamilton Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 12:56 PM
Thanks Charlie, I haven't been able to write since my wife's diagnosis, but at least contests keep my mind active.
Dietrich Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 11:22 PM
Awesome models, John, of doing this acrostic in free verse form! I can't even decide between them which I like the best!!
Hamilton Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 11:37 AM
Thanks Andrea glad you liked them, I'm looking forward to your entry!
Michaels Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 3:16 PM
Nicely done, John. Philosophical and intriguing. Kind regards, John.
Hamilton Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 8:08 PM
Thanks John for the nice visit and comment, looking forward to your entry!
Medders Tobechi Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 9:15 AM
Really like these John. They present a challenge to meet. Thanks. Blessings, Janis.
Hamilton Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 11:50 AM
Thanks Janice, I'm looking forward to your entry!
Daniel Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 6:00 AM
Two wonderful examples, John:)
Hamilton Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 10:08 AM
Thanks Jo, looking forward to your entry!
Ashley Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 5:43 PM
Great inspirational messages of truth and hope John. Beautifully written. Excellent and enjoyed!
Hamilton Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 6:51 PM
Thanks Susan, looking forward to your entry, I think this will be a good contest, with some amazing poems as a result!
Ibeh Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 5:28 PM
Nicely written pieces, John. I just entered your contest, by the way. Hopefullly I've come up with something satisfactory
Hamilton Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 6:50 PM
Ok thanks Edward look forward to reading it, thanks for passing by with the nice comment!
Allison Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 3:23 PM
What inspiring acrostics John, I'll see if i can come up with something for you:-) hugs Jan xx
Hamilton Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 3:58 PM
I know you can do it Jan, I look forward to your entry!
La France Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 2:12 PM
John, great and inspiring examples for your contest, well done, hope I can come up with something worthy.
Hamilton Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 3:58 PM
I'm sure you will write a beauty Constance, I always look forward to your entry in my contests!
One Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 1:46 PM
Less than 5 minutes? Two great examples my friend.. You do acrostics very well.. Great message, lets hope all can strive for a better humanity..
Hamilton Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 1:56 PM
Well, really...5 minutes each, but yeah. Thanks for your visit and comment, looking forward to your entry.
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