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Humanity

Tired of this feeling, tired of being this way. Anger flows through me like a stream, and there is no dam to stop it. I don't mean to be unkind or rash. I just want it to go away. I have no friends, people are unkind and uncaring. I hate humans. Yes, I know hate is a strong word, but I mean it when I say this. Or maybe, I should say I hate humanity. The way we humans do everything; revolting. Humans are the cause of everything horrid. Everyone is selfish, including I. Our demons become our conscious, controlling all our moves, like we are pieces on a game board. They overpower us and make us ill and disgusting. I hate humanity. If we do not change our wicked ways we will collapse on ourselves, and the end will come. It seems as if Lucifer has came to earth and has brought all his demons with him.

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Skat A

Date: 10/4/2016 8:12:00 PM

Riley Z, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Manmath Dalei

Date: 9/30/2016 7:55:00 AM

Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love

Riley Zimmerman
Date: 9/30/2016 10:18:00 AM

Thank you very much!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/29/2016 11:02:00 PM

Riley Z, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Riley Zimmerman
Date: 9/30/2016 10:22:00 AM

I am a beginner at poetry and I appreciate your kind words. I would like some criticism, because I would like to make something out of my poems. I like your poems, they are very good! Thank you again. :) :)