Humane Nature

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Poetic Form: Tanka

Inspired: 2023 November 16

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powerless creek creaks unable pond pondering sun shimmering hope~ a nuturing nature hails chilly issue jiffy freeze

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Paige Hind

Date: 11/18/2023 9:41:00 PM

What a way to look at it. I truly loved reading you.

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/18/2023 9:55:00 PM

A splurge tingled with this one, Paige. Aloha, William

Anonomus Scorpio

Date: 11/16/2023 4:55:00 PM

If only hope in humans was as warm as sunshine... very enjoyable H.P. Regards A.S.

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/16/2023 6:08:00 PM

Storms grow rainbows, rain grows flora, and stars glow the night. Humans will need to glow and grow in this imperfect world to realize hope. Cheers for your sharing and visit, my friend. Aloha, William