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Voice: Jason Williams (my boyfriend)

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How we love this secluded pond He lowers me to the grass And on my stomach I watch Little beetles, blue dragonflies Transparent wings fluttering soft humming near my ears My smiles born broadly in sunlight His tender hands hold my back to his chest. And in the shallow pool numerous tadpoles curiously investigate my otherwise useless legs without pity or shame He smiles words of joy to me In my ears and to my mouth Red squirrel clambers the tree near our temporary bed where his hands fumble and his mouth smiles broadly between my hands, breeze lifting my curls as wings on small hummingbirds From the corners of his eyes The lazy luce ponders the strange ways of human tenderness While he holds me in his endless loving patience That doesn't care about ability Just we, water, sun and together *** February 6, 2017

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Date: 2/8/2017 9:36:00 PM
Such a lovely description of yourself, and I mean that!
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Darren White
Date: 2/10/2017 12:53:00 AM
Arthur, thank you!!
Date: 2/8/2017 8:09:00 PM
Truly Beautiful imagery. Such a great poem, D.! -- Wesley C
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Darren White
Date: 2/10/2017 12:53:00 AM
So happy you love this one Wesley :)
Date: 2/7/2017 6:52:00 PM
Such a beautiful image you brought with this poem, my friend - loved it <3
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Darren White
Date: 2/10/2017 12:52:00 AM
<3 my dear friend
Date: 2/7/2017 5:38:00 AM
a cornucopia of imagery accentuating a picturesque (and loving) day. John
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Darren White
Date: 2/7/2017 5:47:00 AM
I'd like to be there, do that, in summer :) Thank you John.
Date: 2/6/2017 9:53:00 PM
You brought the summer back on this cold winter day <3 Love the picture too!
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Darren White
Date: 2/6/2017 11:51:00 PM
Thanks Sara <3
Date: 2/6/2017 9:40:00 PM
Great imagery in this piece mate! I hope your hospital visit goes well my friend!
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Darren White
Date: 2/6/2017 11:45:00 PM
Hope so too Budgie, I am nervous
Date: 2/6/2017 8:30:00 AM
This is like a bubble of tenderness never meant to be burst Darren. Someone loves you a lot.
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Darren White
Date: 2/6/2017 8:43:00 AM
Yes, he does, now I need to be able to be with him. Long distance relationships aren't always easy :) Thanks Jean!
Date: 2/6/2017 8:00:00 AM
Sounds like an enchanting lazy afternoon in nature my friend. Nicely done. This felt good to read.
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Darren White
Date: 2/6/2017 8:04:00 AM
Yes, and I love those blue dragonflies near the water so very much. Thanks my friend :)

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