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Voice: Jason Williams (my boyfriend)

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Human Tenderness

How we love this secluded pond
He lowers me to the grass
And on my stomach I watch
Little beetles, blue dragonflies
Transparent wings fluttering
soft humming near my ears
My smiles born broadly in sunlight

His tender hands hold my back
to his chest. And in the shallow
pool numerous tadpoles curiously
investigate my otherwise useless
legs without pity or shame
He smiles words of joy to me
In my ears and to my mouth

Red squirrel clambers
the tree near our temporary
bed where his hands fumble
and his mouth smiles broadly
between my hands, breeze
lifting my curls as wings
on small hummingbirds

From the corners of his eyes
The lazy luce ponders the strange
ways of human tenderness
While he holds me in his
endless loving patience
That doesn't care about ability
Just we, water, sun and together

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February 6, 2017
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Vaso Avatar
February 8, 2017 at 9:36 PM
Such a lovely description of yourself, and I mean that!
White Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 12:53 AM
Arthur, thank you!!
Cadet Avatar
February 8, 2017 at 8:09 PM
Truly Beautiful imagery. Such a great poem, D.! -- Wesley C
White Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 12:53 AM
So happy you love this one Wesley :)
Polydoro Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 6:52 PM
Such a beautiful image you brought with this poem, my friend - loved it <3
White Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 12:52 AM
<3 my dear friend
Herlihy Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 5:38 AM
a cornucopia of imagery accentuating a picturesque (and loving) day. John
White Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 5:47 AM
I'd like to be there, do that, in summer :) Thank you John.
Ella Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 9:53 PM
You brought the summer back on this cold winter day <3 Love the picture too!
White Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 11:51 PM
Thanks Sara <3
Wolf Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 9:40 PM
Great imagery in this piece mate! I hope your hospital visit goes well my friend!
White Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 11:45 PM
Hope so too Budgie, I am nervous
Murray Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 8:30 AM
This is like a bubble of tenderness never meant to be burst Darren. Someone loves you a lot.
White Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 8:43 AM
Yes, he does, now I need to be able to be with him. Long distance relationships aren't always easy :) Thanks Jean!
Green Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 8:00 AM
Sounds like an enchanting lazy afternoon in nature my friend. Nicely done. This felt good to read.
White Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 8:04 AM
Yes, and I love those blue dragonflies near the water so very much. Thanks my friend :)
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